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In the Place of Eridu, Pt. 2

Updated on January 17, 2018
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April has been a psychology student for 6 years. She has a Bachelors Degree in psychology and is currently attaining her Masters Degree.

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When I went home his keen scent weighed heavy on my mind

I caught the winds to the castle

I landed on a tree branch to watch him from a distance

I watch as he turn in to bed

I clutch on to the castle walls in the dark dark night



Waiting for him to sleep deeply and deeply

I krept inside looking over his handsome face

Something happens as my fangs come out to bite

I am over taken again by an energy

It repels me

Manipulating my energy as did before

I changed 3x more

I slid between the blankets clutching him down to the bed

He looks on in fear

I lick his lips

He cant believe what is happening

I lick him upon his neck

Licking and kissing

um umm ummm

You taste so good

I sniff into his nostrills um umm ummm so sweat

Why is it I cant drink your blood lamb

No matter

I will seduce you

I lick up and down his chest down to his navel

Than down below

I go on and on

He doseth not fear as my eyes began to glow

I tease him

Would you like for me to stop

He yells no please no

Don't stop

I go on and on

I growl deeply

He takes notice of my face

You are the woman from the market

To my surprise he clutches hold of me

We toss and turn making love wildly and madly

Like two wild animals

Though I could not understand why I could not draw blood

Than he says I love you

Than I am repelled even more

What is this love that you speak

Than I feel this energy again and feel over taken and faint

We continue going at it like wild animals in the night

Heavy breathing and moaning fills the air

Than he say's let us become one blood

I bite down into his lovely neck

His blood so sweat

um umm ummm

So warm ummm

I lick around the piercings as I finish

He rests in my arms the rest of the night


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    • tsmog profile image

      Tim Mitchell 

      8 years ago from Escondido, CA

      I hear the clock , , ,tick-tock, tick-tock , , ,yet time is held still while reading this ballad part II , , ,now I jump to 3 seeking more , , ,:)

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      Nell Rose 

      9 years ago from England

      Hi, I see Micky is getting really into this! lol I love it!

    • pan1974 profile imageAUTHOR

      April Seldon 

      9 years ago from New Orleans

      I just love your humor

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 

      9 years ago

      Pan- if you ever need a neck...

    • pan1974 profile imageAUTHOR

      April Seldon 

      9 years ago from New Orleans

      Thank you both

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      9 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      Oh, this was a great conclusion and way steamy! I think I need a ciggy now.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 

      9 years ago

      That is some dark, bloody lovemaking. Great imagination for the macabre and menacing.

    • pan1974 profile imageAUTHOR

      April Seldon 

      9 years ago from New Orleans

      lol, thank you for your comment.

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      Mentalist acer 

      9 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Passionate,now just who was seduced...OHhh It truly doesn't matter!;)


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