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In The Place of Eridu pt 3

Updated on January 18, 2018
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April has been a psychology student for 6 years. She has a Bachelors Degree in psychology and is currently attaining her Masters Degree.

Spooky castles
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The Change

I watch him change

He screams in agony

as his fingers and nails stretch

auugh opening his mouth wildly

Painfully his sharps pertrude on each side

I whisper....

Don't hold back

Let the pain run it's coarse

Give in

Let it take control

Give me your fingers

Let me lick them one by one

I will sizzle the pain to nothingness

Melt with me

I will take this pain

Stare deep into my eyes and fall into my soul

Come into my trance

I will take care of you

Listen to my warm voice

See the blue mist unfold

Come into the doors of my soul

I will open my gates and welcome you

Swallow your pain I will

Formless and void it will become in the pit of my stomach

Do not fear

Do not fear the darkness

Embrace it

For if there is no darkness 

there is no light

Even out the odds

Let the change unfold

Give me more of your pain

Don't hold back

Share it with me

I will harness it

It feeds my fire

my desire

Oh yes I feel the serge

It entices me and drives me madly insane

No don't pull back

It's my pleasure

Thrill me 

Kiss me

Hold me

Melt with me

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    • pan1974 profile imageAUTHOR

      April 

      7 years ago from Columbus,Ga

      Thank you visiting my hub tsmog

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      Tim Mitchell 

      7 years ago from Escondido, CA

      Now this continuing ballad has pierced digging deeply toward a vein of desire to read more and more. The ambiance of the castle walls dimly casting their shadows from distant moon light causes me to move quickly to number 4, revisiting what started the quest of reading.

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      bbnix 

      7 years ago from Southern California

      Very nice first visit for me. I think I'll have to check out the other parts, not to mention follow you now ... with much anticipation, I might add... :)

      Thanks so much...

      bb

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      Nell Rose 

      7 years ago from England

      Hi, this is really good and spooky, Micky behave yourself! lol seriously, I love these sort of poems or stories, I read so many vampire books, in fact I have just read a book called Midnight, can't remember the author, but it's great, cheers nell

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      Micky Dee 

      7 years ago

      Yes ma'am! I'm gone. Melted! Glass of water might help. Beautiful!

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      Levi Joshua Kell 

      7 years ago from Arizona

      Trippy as usual. Cool. Thanx!

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