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In love, be like ...

Updated on November 16, 2015

a light autumn leaf

that takes its gentle course

to glide to its soft destination

at its own pace,

and

not like a heavy spring fruit

that thuds itself to the hard ground

only to get badly broken

at speed,

the terrific Moon at its cool

always beaming a warm emotion

and

not like the scorching Sun

that terribly heats the warmth of the feel,

a candid candy

gradually pulling in the pleasure strings

of your sweetheart

at your own leisure

and

not like a stealthy hound

pouncing into a sudden plunge

only to scare!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq RLA

    • Rachel L Alba profile image

      Rachel L Alba 21 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      A very lovely poem. I really enjoyed it.

      Have a Blessed Thanksgiving.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Lar Jo Erc Man for your wiring words

    • Larry Rankin profile image

      Larry Rankin 21 months ago from Oklahoma

      Beautifully done.

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      John Hansen 21 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Yes I want to be like a "light autumn leaf"....good poem Suj.

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      Eric Dierker 21 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I like it. I say let the process take the rest of your life and take it easy, to be savored. Great job.

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      manatita44 21 months ago from london

      WoW! An incredible piece! Yes, why rush? In love, it is always a dream; a vision. So ethereal; so deep and profound. Roses dance and praise in the 'forever-togetherness' of this magical moment. Hari Om!