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The Forest - Haiku

Updated on November 21, 2016
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I wrote these haiku all the while thinking about the mysteries of the forest.

The forest is a magical place and has many secrets cleverly concealed from the human eye. I guess we can all imagine how the forest would be if we can truly see and feel the magic!!


silver moonlight stream

fireflies lighted dancing glow

sleeping flowers rise


twittering birds sing

lifting spirits of Dryads

nymphs casting magic


sighing boughs bend down

bearing leaves flowers and fruits

not minding the weight


in magical land

where dreams and wishes come true

blessed by fairies


sun rays filter through

dancing patterns come alive

nature enacting

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Wonderful Haiku Vellur;voted up and shared.

      Eddy.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Eiddwen thank you for reading and your constant support. Much appreciated.

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      Jools99 3 years ago from North-East UK

      Really wonderful haiku, I especially liked the last stanza, 'not minding the weight', it was as if the trees were alive - wonderful!

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Beautifully expressed and so well described thanks for this wonderful thoguht

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Very lovely and magical!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Jools99 thank you for reading and for the lovely comment.

      DDE thank you for stopping by and for your appreciation.

      Faith Reaper thank you, trees and forests are all about magic!!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Brilliant and lovely poem!

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      Mohan Kumar 3 years ago from UK

      Beautiful- ethereal. I love the one of Dryads and nymphs... highly visual and evocative, Nithya, well done!

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      TDM 3 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      enchanting indeed vellur. nice job. voted up.

      I. White

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      If trees have feelings ( I think they do. ) they must feel happy when they produce fruit or leaves...I love your poem..Thank you..

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      Bernadyn 3 years ago from Jacksonville, Florida

      Lovely poem, the forest has always seemed so enchanting to me. This poem brings out the life and wonder that must be abundant all around those trees! Beautiful, voted up :-)

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      Michelle Liew 3 years ago from Singapore

      Wow. And I just took a trek through a mini rainforest yesterday...this sums that trip up perfectly. Thanks for sharing, Nithya.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      James-wolve

      Docmo

      Issac White

      always exploring

      BNadyn

      midget 38

      Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments. Much appreciated.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Vellur this is a beautiful Haiku.. may I ask do you have a poetry books published? .. if so can you send me the link? I would love to purchase it

      blessings my friend

      Debbie

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Deborah Brooks thank you. I do not have any books published. I have all my writings online. I just started writing seriously one year ago. After that I kept publishing online. Never thought of a book as such!! Thank you for your interest.

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Silver moon light stream

      Fire flies lighted dancing glow

      Sleeping flowers rise

      loved this hub especially the above words.

      Enjoy your day Vellur.

      Eddy.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Eiddwen thank you, am glad you liked my haiku. Have a great day.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Thanks for the magical trip to the forest.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Gypsy Rose Lee thank you for stopping by. Thanks for the vote too.

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      dreamseeker2 3 years ago

      Beautiful thoughts of nature in Haiku form. Voted it up and interesting. : )

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      dreamseeker2 thank you for stopping by. You made my day!! Thanks for the vote too.

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      Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

      I could see the Dryads coming out of the trees, wonderful! voted up and shared, nell

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Nell Rose am so happy, you could see what I wrote. This made my day! Thank you for stopping by.

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      rdsparrowriter 3 years ago

      Fantastic haiku Nithya :) Beautiful image as well :) Voted up and awesome :)

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      rdsparrowriter thank you, you made my day!! Thanks for the vote too.

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      Vicki L Hodges 3 years ago from Arkansas, USA

      This is beautiful. It sounds so magical. Many votes!

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Victoria thank you for stopping by. Thanks for the votes too.

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      Karen Silverman 3 years ago

      Wow! This was so vivid - i could actually see it playing out in my mind!

      it was magical - thank you!

      sharing on...

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      ImKarn23 thank you for stopping by, thanks for the share too.

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      precy anza 3 years ago from San Diego

      Took me to a magical place. Beautiful ^-^' Love the photo too.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      precy anza thank you, am glad you liked it.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Beautiful haiku. Voted up and shared.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      rajan jolly thank you for reading. Thanks for the vote and the share.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

      Nithya, your observations about the jungle is ethereal.

      Have a wonderful evening.

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      Mary Craig 3 years ago from New York

      Not just a forest but a magical forest. You make it serene and beautiful!

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Vinaya thank you, the forest is indeed ethereal.

      tillsontitan thank you, the forest has a special magic of it's own. Thanks for the votes too.

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      suzettenaples 3 years ago

      These haiku are beautiful and so is the photo! These take me away from present surroundings into the deep, dark forest and land of the fairies . Beautiful journey!

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      suzettenaples thank you for your visit and appreciation. You made my day!!

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Nithya, haiku is such a wonderful form of poetry. Though it looks very simple but to portray the world,as it is, is really a very tough task. You have beautifully brought a real forest to our eyes through this very fantastic poem.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Harishprasad thank you for your appreciation and leaving an in detail comment.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Beautiful haiku Vellur, well done. I could imagine myself in that forest.

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      Nithya Venkat 2 years ago from Dubai

      Jodah thank you for your appreciation, you made my day!

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