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In the Mind of a Woman

Updated on March 21, 2012

"A Woman is an Egnima wrapped up inside a body of Emotions" ~ Cleaner3

" Happiness is like a butterfly,

the more you chase it,

the more it will elude you.

But if you turn your attention to other things,

It will come and sit softly on your shoulder. ~ Thoreau




What is hidden in the mind of a woman ?

if only a man could see

the thoughts of love and life

in her mind, known only by she


She dreams of her life

how different it could be

no children, no worries

a life,... that's so carefree.


A dozen different suitors,

all bring flowers happily

trying to win her sweet favours

but only one will ever see...


How she can make him feel

when they are all alone

making sweet love so softly

snuggling together in their happy home.


Yes, the mind of a Woman

whats inside only she knows

the thoughts of love, the longings for...

maybe just some poetic prose.



















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      asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

      dear well said without her man is nothing.and your piece of writing is depicting the beautiful imagery with the depth of meaning.Your concept is worth praising .voted up! beautiful

      words of a woman

      Asma

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      asmaiftikhar, thank you for visiting "my hub". your comments are greatly appreciated. thats what i want to hear the words of a woman.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Nice poem, when a man opens his heart to love of his woman, soon he will be able to understand what's in her mind.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine, thank you for your comments. when a man can understand a woman then he has truly lost his mind.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Lovely poem Cleaner

      I believe it takes a man she can totally trust before she will allow him to know her and understand her :)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Rosemay, thank you for commenting, Trust is very important in a relationship.

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      Andee Rose Carpenter 5 years ago from Past the sunrise, left of the moon

      Ooh! Such a lovely poem! I love it!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Anndee, thank you for your comments. very happy that you have visited and like my poem.

      Michael

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      Quite interesting perspective. Now I am going to return the favor. I have written a poem based on "In the Mind of a Woman". Is called Inside a Woman's Soul.Hope it meets the expectations.

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      Jen Christopherson 5 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      You really found a lovely way of saying women don't think or act like men, don't you?!?

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      You know me dreamer, i love the women and praise them as all men should. very interesting species they are.!!!

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      Andee Rose Carpenter 5 years ago from Past the sunrise, left of the moon

      How beautiful! You have a way of getting to the heart of a womans mind...

      This is beautiful!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you my sweet Rose, watch out or I will steal your heart.

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      D.Juris Stetser 5 years ago from South Dakota

      Michael, I think you really appreciate women which would have them trust you, and share their thoughts, dreams, and heartaches with you. How else can you have such insight into the workings of our minds? I enjoyed your poem tremendously. Thank you again for sharing your talents with us all. dotti

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      yes...Dotti, i love the female species and have the utmost respect for them . I also love to make love and see what makes them tick , they also are all so different very intrigueing!!!

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Lets face it Cleaner , we are hooked .....line and sinker !lol......+++++

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      ahorseback , thanks foe the conmments. yes we can't live without them .

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