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In Dreams She Comes (poem)

Updated on July 14, 2013

In dreams she comes to me

A broken memory

Of things not meant to be

Another world apart

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She whispers come along

A chorus of a song

Whose hold on me seems strong

Amid an empty sleep

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Her image I can’t place

A mist does veil her face

Yet still I feel a trace

Of what she was to me

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A kiss mid summer’s trees

The fantasies she frees

A world a time to please

Oh tell me once again

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And still I hear her call

As reason starts to fall

What lies behind this wall

Which keeps me from her side

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My passions there she holds

My destiny she molds

As what was real unfolds

Within this realm she roams

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Then suddenly a knife

Appears to end this strife

If I would pledge my life

To dream for evermore

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I took it and I prayed

To whom my soul pervade

As my heart felt the blade

And I greeted morning

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      The ending was a surprise. We can relate to the heart's rememberance of love and the sadness of it's loss.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Enjoyed much and passing this on.

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      Flowing and fittingly surrealistic. Beautifully done.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      I just loved the way this read... but the words and the ultimate message are absolutely amazing.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      A wonderful description of a love that was never meant to be.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Great poetry from a talented writer and I so enjoyed reading this poem.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      You are funny in your limericks. But in other genres, you evoke different type of emotions that take you deep within your soul.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful awesome poem!...Isn't it just like a dream, to end just as the yearnings are about to be fulfilled? :)

      Heartfelt and very touching.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Awesome poem and so beautifully and cleverly written !

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      Lisa Williams 4 years ago

      Wow, this was beautiful and amazing. I absolutely loved it and voted up!

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 4 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Lovely dream of lost love. I felt his sorrow and longing for what once was.