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In My Room (poem)

Updated on October 29, 2012

I feel its heartbeat there beyond the door

As here I lay imprisoned by my bed

With thoughts of fear now racing through my head

To shout he’s here the one you’re searching for

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It’s then I hear the doorknob slowly turn

I cling to sheets for safety they provide

Another sleep a safer place to hide

A cloud of ifs my mind began to churn

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Is that its footsteps now within my room

Or merely madness my mind has set free

Surprising how long time’s second can be

For coward who runs away from his doom

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So thus I must face the cause of this strife

The last thing I saw was passing of…

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      I just felt goosebumps on me at the end of the poem that wasn't there. Cleverly done!

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      stars439 5 years ago from Louisiana, The Magnolia and Pelican State.

      The inevitability of facing ones on last fears must be a trying circumstance. GBY. Interesting hub.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I like the feel of this...it encourages one to use one's own mind.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      This reminded me of one of those heart pounding scenes in the movie The Haunting. lol

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      BOO!

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      Claudia Mitchell 5 years ago

      Passing of what...of what... Now I'll be thinking of that for a while. Very intriguing poem.

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      travmaj 5 years ago from australia

      Doh! Thank you - well done.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      insert the word life or knife the poem is scary

      insert the word wife the poem is hilarious

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      travmaj 5 years ago from australia

      So intriguing - I can't decide - any more clues on the elusive three words?

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago

      Brilliant work Mhatter. Song choice was perfect as well. Voted up, awesome, and interesting

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I read it twice and didn't find it funny, but i did find it scary..BOO..HA..Another great poem..

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      I have many a dream where I think someone or thing is in my bedroom. I then fight to stay awake terrified I will go back into the ghostly dream...then I get mad and say, "alright bring it on," and whatever is gone and I sleep soundly!

      Brilliant poem, and yes you can take it either way!

      Jan

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      This poem can either be scary or funny

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      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      Scary, scary, Hatter. We'll be celebrating the month of the Hungry Ghosts in Singapore starting tomorrow. This is one for the occasion!

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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Under the covers, that's where I'm going! Yikes! Great poem.

      Voted up.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      That music video and poem was scary!

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mh,

      Awesome job here buddy! Suspenseful and captivating!

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Love this, you know Halloween is just around the corner so expecting a spooky one for that :)

      Laughing at rcrumple's comment :)

      Awesome and suspenseful (is that a word?)

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Gosh..............thank God here it is day start now....though I don fear ghosts and all.(yes..true).....but your this poem has such a chilling effect to it,,,,ummmm hope you getting me as I am exactly can not describe it. You are getting really kind of more chilling, icy, interestingly captivating etc etc ( rcrmple has already said spicier above) with every new poem.

      Thanks for sharing this one....I hope you have something to post during the day somethings happier....will wait for sure.

      Votes....shares:-)

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Mh -

      ... wife as she returned from the bathroom after taking off her make-up....the horror of it all!

      Sorry, it's a personality flaw I have. Versatility is the spice of life and you're getting spicier with each offering! Great Job, my friend! Awesome!

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      There are 3 words that can replace ...

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Intriguing and spooky...as I now try to go to sleep!

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      Patty Kenyon 5 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Creepy and Awesome!!!!

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      wetnosedogs 5 years ago from Alabama

      Great work. Hope I can sleep tonight!

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Yikes! Very interesting with a sudden "death" ending . . . In His Love, Faith Reaper

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