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Incense stick - the Poem

Updated on October 4, 2012
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Incense sticks are burning bright

The fragrance is flowing light,

Some soul around is flying tight

Emotions ripe and fluid fright.

The dazzling flame at the pick

Sweeping wind makes it trip,

The peek-a-boo orange flip

Little glow burning wind whip.

The delicate scent flowing

The fresh flowers adorning,

The glory so much alluring

For some death is progressing.

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Slow poisoning of some soul

Death of aromatic life crawl,

Braided misty smokes howl

Caravan of teardrop to bowl.

Garland of flowers fresh décor

For death is precious ardour,

The incense sticks wait fervour

To die spreading scent armour.

Death is the cocoon surrounding

Inhale aroma till the heart is burning,

After me exist in past tense feeling

You will still have my aroma reeling.

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Inside your core of existence

Everywhere you go my prudence,

Follow your shadow with continuance

Let the incense sticks burn to credence.

My heart is an incense stick

For you, I burn till the last flick,

When the story is over

I rest in the misty aroma in your heart.

Please burn the stick another ……..

The wind will carry the aroma till the infinity.

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Allow me to linger when

Someplace besides… ,

the fragrances will prevail…..

Ashes of death wing to aromatic décor.

Let me burn more every instance

To love you …

To be inhaled by you

To die for you….

Incense to sense you till the time will tire !!!!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear ImKarn23,

      Hey thank you for your kind visit, comment here. I don know if its unique but i just write what comes to mind.

      Nice to have you here for sure....have a good day ahead

      deergha

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      i may be off base here in my interpretation because, as flashmakeit mentioned - it's quite unique..

      personally i find the sense of smell to be the most sensual - almost moreso than touch.. certain smells can take you certain places over and over - it's magical..

      and sexy..

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks Dear Michelle....its nice to have you here. Its my pleasure actually. Thanks again for your votes too.

      God bless you dear

      deergha

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      Thnak you @ Minnetonka Twin for your kind visit, words here. Its very much precious for me.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you @ Linda......for your kind visit and insightful comment here.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you dear @ flashmakeit........for you find it unique and different. Your view is much appreciated here always.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      That was really different and unique!

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      Linda Cassini 4 years ago from Las Vegas NV

      The smoke drew me near and the fragnance of content kept my eyes pleased... :)

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      Very creative use of the incense stick in association with lingering on after death. I like to patchouli sticks. I've always loved that smell.

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Thank you for this poem. Not only lovely words, but the words about the smells and lovely incense.

      Voted up.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you dear Gypsy.....I am honored to have a friend like you ......your words and comment is always much looked forward.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. So lovely I could just about smell some of my favorite incense magnolia and jasmine. Loved this.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@girishpuri for you stopped by and took off to comment here. It is much appreciated.

      god bless you

      deergha

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      my heart is an incense stick,

      for you, i burn till the last flick, brilliant

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Jan,

      Thank you so much for supporting me here. Your words, visits, votes all are very precious for me and a great source of inspiration.

      god bless you

      deergha

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      What a beauty! I loved the idea of the incense sticks. This is fabulous poetry, voted up.

      Jan