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Incomplete epitaph – a poem

Updated on November 5, 2013

Nailing the elixir of nothingness

Beyond and evermore….

And then the sheer luxury of life

Sometimes it is a yoke unexpected

And other time a riddle neglected

Beyond and evermore,

Life flows to the uncanny core.


Failing the beats of heart to emptiness

Beyond and evermore………….

And then mere cursory commitments

Sometimes it is a ditch endless

Other time a drama mindless

Beyond and evermore,

Life flows to the uncanny core.


Trailing the aridity left upon by smears

Beyond and evermore…………..

And then rare nursery of enmity within

Sometimes it is marks of fears

Other time leftover trails of tears

Beyond and evermore,

Life flows to the uncanny core.


Core is void of expressions

Incessant decrees in an incomplete epitaph

Beyond lays the frontier of forbearance….

Evermore death walks the life out of heart….

Uncanny is the heave without a source fervent ..

Seductive appeal of the dark bottomless eyes….

Never the less I am loosing myself bit by bit….

Sipping from a cup of elixir soaring death eternal….

Let me get seduced and dive in your eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!


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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you so much @nighthag ...glad that you have loved this one. God bless you


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      K.A.E Grove 4 years ago from Australia

      A beautiful tapestry of words that weave together in a surreal but beautiful way, so very well done

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks Dear Deb,

      Your words are precious for me. Hope you have a great day ahead.


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      It is amazing what can happen with life, just by one unexpected turn. The essence of that was captured perfectly.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you very much for your visit and comment. Glad that you liked this one.

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      Abba Elijah aka elijagod 4 years ago from Abuja - Nigeria

      Whao !!!!

      This poem is interesting

      Well done dghbrh !

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you once again dear BlossomSB...:-)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      so very good!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Prithima Sharma..welcome to my lill world of poems and writings..Thank you for your first ever visit here and hope you have a wonderful time ahead. take care and God bless you always

      Eddy...many thanks for your visit and comment here my friend..hope you having a nice time and take care.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A wonderful poem and one to thoroughly enjoy and vote up.


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      Prithima Sharma 4 years ago from Delhi, India


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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dearest Faith.....thank you ...glad that you liked this one...votes and shares are also much cherished for. Take care..luv


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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Brilliant as always, dear deergha.

      Up and more

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear ..DDE and kidscraft ..thank you both once again.....your words are precious and God bless you all always...THANKS

      Dear Leslie....its sooo nice to have your here after a long gap..hope you keeping well and enjoying are very kind..take care and many smiles your way:-)

      tillsontitan....many thanks for your time here..glad that you have loved this one....votes and visit is much more appreciated for always..take care


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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      What can I add to what's already been said? Such a deep feeling stirs within when reading this, right to the uncanny core.

      Voted up, awesome, and interesting.

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Your poem is flowing in a beautiful rhythm, Deergha! The choice of black and white pictures fits your poem very well!

      Thanks for sharing your gift!

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      "Life flows to the uncanny core"...and this poem touches almost as deeply. You are a Master, a Mistress - a Maestro of poetry, my friend.

      so glad i dropped in..

      will sharexx

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Incomplete epitaph – a poem so beautifully written I really enjoyed reading life has too many commitments and so many experiences


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