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Ingenuity and Ode

Updated on May 10, 2011
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I stand above these rocks that glow

Within the ore inferno grows

An effigy of mineral soon to be ash

Conflagration with momentum thrash

The black feathered hang so low

Billows of soot elapsed below

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Chroniker in roman integer’s fracture

Walking within my incubus rapture

Submerged an escalier within the seaway

Metallic sounds in the draft replay

Disintegrating with every step taken

Approached with tempo history forsaken

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Inhale the breathe of a lobo

As a tune played of an oboe

A feathered headdress he wore

Upon the spirits he implored

Steady scrutiny he possessed

As the lobo consumed and ingest

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Billy, that is my favorite stanza out of all I have written I have to agree with ya!! Thank you, you are truly a personal support buddy that I carry along my path every where I go!!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Flying on wings of friendship, guided by a sweet sense of direction named, My Bella...

      I float through the air and never despair for a woman's heart I do trust in.

      A whisper I feel as if my own keel, for this woman, she leaves me quite breathless.

      A tear, much like a touch, sits forever as so much, on my cheek for all of eternity.

      For if its not clear, this woman so dear, has gifted my heart from obscurity

      I feel the strength of time itself with little I cannot squelch for this woman does little but inspire me..

      How I can I possibly put into words a response to such an incredible poem. How do I parse such a beautiful pearl of wisdom and grace, but I have to tell you, the stanza:

      "Chroniker in roman integer’s fracture

      Walking within my incubus rapture

      Submerged an escalier within the seaway

      Metallic sounds in the draft replay

      Disintegrating with every step taken

      Approached with tempo history forsaken"....................

      totally blows my mind...

      much luv', hugs and kisses (so there!) X0 X0

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Qud, Thank you I appreciate it as always you are simply the best!!

      Astra, Awww you are too sweet I really appreciate the visit and comment!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      A wonderful poem, you have some great poetry to your credit here. Thank you.

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      QudsiaP1 6 years ago

      Very intense, I enjoyed it thoroughly.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Sub, I found them at www.devianart.com very great stuff there check it out. Oh and I have started working on the little thing I sent you :)

      Samia, THank you just some thoughts :)

      Real, Thank you I liked them as well I felt I had to write about them when I saw them :)

      Mar, Thank you I tend to try a bit to hard tho.....

      Thought, I love the images aren't they just fab???

      Thank you!!

      Stigma, Awww thanks a bunch pal!!

      Shy, I tried with this one I really did cant lie it took me 8 hours to write these three :/Thanks gal!!

      B., I try this one I did try thanks B!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      You always give us a different path to walk as we follow...you! Good one Girl.

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      shygirl2 6 years ago

      Very descriptive. Each verse fitting neatly to describe the pictures painted in our minds. Good work, bella...as always with your poems and thoughts. : )

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      Stigma31 6 years ago from Kingston, ON

      excellent words to the imagery...like always, you are the best...voting up!

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      Christina Lornemark 6 years ago from Sweden

      Lovely photos that fits so well to your fantastic poetry!

      Tina

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      marellen 6 years ago

      Bella..like I always say, the poets on hubPages are the best. Love your work.

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      Kelly Umphenour 6 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Up and awesome! Loved the photos too!

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      samiaali 6 years ago

      Hi bellawritter23, This is very beautiful! I love the subject. :)

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      James W. Nelson 6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Bellawritter23, you always find such interesting photos to illustrate your poetry. Good work!

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Shan, Aww you are truly too sweet. I am very flattered that you see me as a torch I am grateful for you. lol MC is my all time favorite! Thank you

      smiles :)

      bella

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      shanaya 6 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      Dear Bella Ma'am! Everybody needs a TORCH to see through DARKNESS, You are a TORCH to all of us who can throw out our DARKNESS.:) UP, AWESOME, & BEAUTIFUL:)

      ”I can make it through the rain, i can stand up once again”

      Above quote suits you perfectly.:) You have made it.:)

      LOTS OF LOVE

      SHANAYA

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Ace, I am very flattered that you find me inspirational to you especially the goddess of love her self. Thank you very much!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You have an incredible gift Bella. Your poetry always makes my heart sing - you are an inspiration.

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      smiles right back...

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Johnny awwww you are to sweet really. I felt these images and just released inner feelings to it I guess lol I appreciate you really I do.

      smiles :)

      bella

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      Bella as I always find beauty in what you write, i must say this touched me in ways i have yet to see. So much passion in words of images not seen by ones eyes, but felt in the soul of the broken. a feeling of sorrow in the joy that is painful. very deeply taken in as the moment in one is forsaken. UP, awesome and beautiful.

      Johnny Love