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Insatiable Love

Updated on January 3, 2012

I can see the stars shining down on me

As I lie here beside you, Baby!

Your arms wrapping me ever so tightly.

I begin to lose track of reality.


I can see the sky forming a canopy

As your lips move over mine in such a hurry.

Blazing fire coarsing through my body

Oh God, the taste of your lips feels so heavenly.


I can sense the breeze magnifying your scent around me

My vision's blurred; I'm in a state of pure ecstasy.

The Insatiable need is making my voice husky

As the words tumble out "Come inside me baby".


I can feel the waves of pure bliss penetrating through my body

As you get up and take over me.

Everything disappears between the sky & the deep blue sea

As You love me so Insatiably.


© Copyright Hajira Ehsan

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank You so much..

      Have a great day :)

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      Marwan Asmar 5 years ago from Amman, Jordan

      Penetration at its best!

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      lost love 5 years ago from Flames of water and love

      Beyond beautiful the feeling of never being satisfied. Always longing, yearning, needing so much more. Voted way up and very beautiful. Great feeling portrayed within your lovely words.

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      @Marwan Asmar- Indeed it is!! Thanks for reading

      Have a nice year ahead :)

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      @Jspot- Thank you so much Jspot.. When love gives way to lust and lust satisfies love, a never ending hunger coarses through the soul.

      Take care :)

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      Rosemary Amrhein 5 years ago from Boston, MA

      Very romantic, nice job!

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      @BloNdey- Thank you! I'm glad u think so :)

      Take care

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      howtohandbook 5 years ago from Riyadh

      I really loved your poem. Especially the way it ends. Cheers!

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      @How to handbook- Thank you so much Farhan.

      Have a nice day

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ah - awesome and totally romantic. Bless you!

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank You Acaetnna..! I feel honoured to have u here.

      Take care :)

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Beautiful, sensuous with a touch of the erotica. I love it

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank you,Jo.. I'm glad you liked it.

      Blessings and Smiles :)

      Take care

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      What a beautiful poem. So sensual and delightful.

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      @Astra Nomik- Thank You so much Cathy.. Its an honour to have u here..

      Have a nice day :)

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Wonderful and sensual poem!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Awesome!

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      Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank you Xstatic and Acaetnna..

      Keep smiling :)

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      brewskitimeguy 4 years ago from Maine

      beautifully written...keep writing

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      Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

      Christin53 and Brewskitimeguy- I'm so glad you liked this. Thank you for taking the time and leaving a comment. It helps me to improve.

      Have a nice day :)

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Passionate, sensual...

      Great work... amazing sense of craft...

      Glad to be a fan

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      Cracknutcase 4 years ago from India,bangalore

      @rahul0324-Thank You so much Rahul,

      Much appreciated :)

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