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A Tribute to Ben Breedlove

Updated on January 22, 2014
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Insomuch as I do hope

Wherein lies the will to cope

For whichever path I take

However lightly I must stake


Insomuch as I do dream

Wherein lies the will to deem

For whichever choice I make

However willing I must abate

Insomuch as I do know

Wherein lies the will to sow

For whichever lessons I seek

However priceless I must keep

Insomuch as I do try

Wherein lies the will to fly

For whichever skies I soar

However long I must explore

For in the end

When I should die

Before a God

On my knees

I shall cry

Doth he judge

My worldy deed

I must show

My worthiness

That I did live

With righteousness

~ For Ben

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    Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

    A lovely poem. To try and keep ourselves holy for God is not easy. May He bless you.

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    dreamseeker2 3 years ago

    We are all accountable for our own actions, which of course can be a result from choices we make. : ) Good poem and thought provoking. Interesting and voted it up!

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    ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

    Thanks Nell ... Cheers, my lady :)

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    Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

    Beautiful poem ziyena, we can but do our best in life, as your poem says, lovely words, voted up and shared! nell

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    Cat 3 years ago from New York

    Aw, thanks Ziyena! I'm just honored to know you! Have a wonderful day!

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    ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

    Thanks Cat ... you're a dear!

    I'll be stopping by your HUB this weekend when I have more time ... your poems are intriguing. Off to work

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    Cat 3 years ago from New York

    Ziyena,

    This is absolutely beautiful! 'Insomuch' set a wonderful mood, which you followed perfectly. Loved the video too.

    Up and others ~ Sharing too!

    Cat

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    ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

    Thanks also to Martin, Dora and pstraubie48 for your support!

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    ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

    Thank you Pamela :)

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    Pamela Kinnaird W 3 years ago from Maui and Arizona

    So uplifting. LOVED it. Voting up, beautiful and Sharing.

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    Dora Isaac Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

    Beautiful self-expression!

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    Patricia Scott 3 years ago from sunny Florida

    Hope, dream, try, know....living with righteousness...that pretty well sums it up!!! Well done....shared and voted up...

    Angels are on the way ps

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    Martin Kloess 3 years ago from San Francisco

    You know I like this. thank you

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    ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

    Thank you ... and I am far from innocent :)

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    SilentReed 3 years ago from Philippines

    In a cynical and materialistic world, I am charmed by the poem's refreshing childlike innocence, unwavering in the belief of a supreme being.

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    ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

    thanks Rose!

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    rose-the planner 3 years ago from Toronto, Ontario-Canada

    A simply beautiful poem, accentuated by a gorgeous video. Priceless! Thank you for sharing your talent. (Voted Up) -Rose

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    Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

    Nice to meet you too!

    Have a nice day there!

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    cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

    Beautiful and awesome are the buttons I pushed... love this piece ZZz..

    flows so smooth so rhythmic so soft.. nice.

    sharing for sure

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    Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

    Nice job, Ziyena!

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    ziyena 3 years ago from Southern Colorado

    Thank you JW

    Nice to meet you!

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    Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

    This is really a perfect poem which is written perfectly. you are an awsome poet, keep it

    Voted up

    peace

    James

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    Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

    The use of repetition is perfect for the flow of this lovely poem. I'm going to continue to treat others with respect and love and I'll take my chances after I die. :) I love your work and always have.

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