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Inspiration Of God

Updated on October 30, 2015

Every breath I take

brings life to the paragraph,

using math to add and subtract what I need.

I write with sun light, illuminating my thoughts

that grow magically

into a galaxy of words

drawn together by gravity.

A new reality forms,

born on paper

which in turn,

gave birth to marks of punctuation

for natural separation.

On different missions

but headed to the same destination.

I am the architect of your construction,

the painter of your picture.

You are the image

I am the creator

come fourth and meet your maker.







Copyright © 2011 Daunt'e Loper


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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      A beautifully expansive praise Daunte.;)

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you acer, I'm glad you enjoyed it

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Seriously, I have goosebumps! Thank you for starting my day with beautiful thoughts and a powerful message!

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you for the positive feedback Fossillady

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      malonge 6 years ago from Western New York On Hubpages

      I like your poems. Keep writing.

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thanks malonge

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      You opened up in a way I never thought of.Great work!!

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      Nellieanna Hay 6 years ago from TEXAS

      Magnificent. You really are a rare poet. That's high praise. And I'm 'getting' the beat and feel of your special inspiration.

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thanks DREAM ON and Nellieanna, positive feedback inspires me.

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      valeriebelew 6 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

      Rather interesting.

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thanks Valerie

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      Peg Cole 6 years ago from Dallas, Texas

      Beautiful cadence and style. Especially loved the line "I write with sunlight illuminating my thoughts".

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you PegCole

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      I like that, i can almost imagine you sitting writing it..... lovely

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you Joy

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      Lakshmi Murukesh 6 years ago from Kollam

      Magical and you are truly blessed by the muse!

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you Lakshmi,I am honored by your comment

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      "I am the architect of your construction,

      the painter of your picture.

      You are the image

      I am the creator

      come fourth and meet your maker."

      This is powerful stuff, Daunte! Crazy as this may sound, I truly believe that God has communicated directly to me through my poetry. It's not a burning bush, and I don't Hear His voice, with my ear...but this strikes me as directly from the Throne...Perhaps that is the message of this poem, that He speaks through the words. I truly felt this!

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you tnderhrt:) I agree with you. Sometimes when i'm writing, I don't even have to put much thought into it. Like the pen is moving by itself.

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      Sarah Writes 6 years ago from California

      So very beautiful, with a perfect ending. Powerful and thought provoking.

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you Sarah

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      Mindy 6 years ago from Cottage Grove, Oregon

      Beautiful!

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thanks mindyjgirl

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      Norma Budden 6 years ago from Nunavut, Canada

      Daunte, this is another exceptional poem. I browsed through some of the comments and, honestly, most times I feel I am not the one writing - merely the instrument which is being used at the moment.

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      Daunte Loper 6 years ago from Detroit Michigan

      Thank you Norma

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