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Intimate Moment ( Terza Rima Poem)

Updated on January 19, 2017
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Ordinary looking at first glance

Then as his lips begin to part

A brilliant smile enchants


Piercing lights of sexiness shoot from his eyes

My heart pounds and flutters at this stranger

Difference of accent, says, he is not of these skies


Why does his culture send him here?

A built of a runner he might have been

Well-shaped legs of a mover that can disappear


Yet he lives with rigidity of heart, trapped

Signalling a black and white stance

Mixed signals of yester year and cosmopolitan strapped


Stomach pain appears, knocking louder and louder

As his soft whisperings increase, my heart shouts run! run! zero hour


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      Kenneth Avery 5 months ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      @threekeys,

      I meant what I said. You ARE good.

      And thank you for the following--I will send you a personal 'thank you' email in the days ahead. Right now I am trying to catch up with all of my projects going on outside of HP.

      Keep up the Great poetry.

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      ThreeKeys 5 months ago from Australia

      Hi Kenneth I'm happy I could take you away from your day just for a moment. Thankyou!

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      Kenneth Avery 5 months ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      threekeys . . .

      Wow!

      Pardon my ignorance for not finding a more-fitting adjective to describe this touching and loving piece of work.

      I felt that I was the guy kissing the lovely girl.

      You are good, my friend.

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      ThreeKeys 5 months ago from Australia

      Im happy you enjoyed my poem little blue feather.

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      J Reyes 5 months ago from The Edge of Saturn

      yes amazing wow!

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      ThreeKeys 6 months ago from Australia

      Delighted

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      ChangingTides2331 6 months ago from Danvers, Mass

      Vivid imagery, i was there.

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      ThreeKeys 6 months ago from Australia

      I am glad you enoyed it.

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      Louise Powles 6 months ago from Norfolk, England

      That's a beautiful piece of poetry. Well done.

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      ThreeKeys 7 months ago from Australia

      Your thoughts are encouraging , eric.

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      Eric Dierker 7 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Really well done -- you took me into the scene in short order, a great talent.