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Invisible Man

Updated on November 22, 2011

A Poem About Seeing With All The Senses

To you I Am

the invisible man

for you don't see me

for what I truly am

maybe if you were

blind

you would

touch me

then see

what of this earth

will become

of me.




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    Keith Matyi 5 years ago from Denton, TX

    Good job! I like poetry and you said it in so few words.

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    gconeyhiden 5 years ago from Brooklyn, N.Y.C. U.S.A

    hi rai 18 & pennyofheaven, thank you for the positive comments. when I write poetry for me it's a balancing act and I tend to write short. I was aware that I could start going thru all the senses but I liked the way these words connected. at one time this poem was shorter, then I added to it and settled for this because it basically says what I intended to say. thanks again gh.

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    pennyofheaven 5 years ago from New Zealand

    Deep meaningful and so true!

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    Rai 18 5 years ago from US

    Good poem! I would love to see you add more senses though.