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Isolated In My Heart

Updated on October 26, 2011

Isolated in my heart, broken feeling, broken soul

Broken life, broken within repair...but despair

Living life full of agony, so hard to strive for happiness

Tears clog up in my eyes, irregular heartbeat, and slow music play

The solo of sadness, painful scars appear, more tears to come

No one near...

Life left me living in darkness

Angel of hell became my friend

And all I’m left is pain and happiness has gone far away

I search for heaven but all I see is crimson

And raining tear gas fall upon me

My body trembles and break...continue isolated heart ache...


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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Derdriu, thank you!

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      Derdriu 6 years ago

      Chanroth: You really know how to make images, rhythm, thoughts and words work together to yield a uniquely wrenching impact!

      Thank you for your creativity, voted up, etc.,


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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      hi phoebe,urban,lyn and raciniwa, thanks for reading. Best wishes to you all.


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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      just think that behind the clouds the sun is shining brightly...great poem...

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      lyns 6 years ago from USA

      Wonderful, very nice hub thanks for sharing, love the title too. Have a wonderful evening...

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

      The mood of the poem is that of sorrow, sadness and pain. You did a great work to convey these emotions. A great poem. Voted awesome, beautiful & interesting

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      Phoebe Pike 6 years ago

      Sad poem... but a fascinating read.