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It Hurts

Updated on February 8, 2012

What hurts the most ?
People often times wonder ?
Being betrayed by the one you love ?
Loosing the one you love ?
Or having a family who doesn't believe in you ?

Please I need an answer
This pain needs surgery
My heart's too heavy
I can no longer feel my breath
My eyes are too watery to see

What hurts the most ?
Watching a friend die and there is nothing you can do ?
Dying to help but you don't have the means ?
Having your hope crushed to piece ?

Please someone answer me.
This pains needs an operation
There is nothing left in my brains
Am so hurt, my feet threads upon fire like water
My body is a tsunami

What hurts the most ?
Not being able to express yourself ?
Or not having anyone to listen to you ?
What hurts the most ?
Having no friends or family to call your own ?
Or waking up one morning to find out that you've being fooled by your all and all..

Please someone answer me ?
Doctors are operating ?
It hurts.. It hurts
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Please don't leave without an answer ?

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      that seems so sad I can feel the pain

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      You bring out the emotion and conflict so well here. It is so well expressed. Voted up and awesome.

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      sassysexybossy 5 years ago from americus,usa

      Touching good job.

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      April 5 years ago from Columbus,Ga

      This is such a sad poem, it takes time to heal and forgive.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh My friend.. great wonderful beautiful poem.. If you need prayer please let me know.. I will pray..

      If you are on Facebook, if you want we could be friends.

      Deborah Brooks Langford

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      It does, though with time, I have come to realize that, it is easy to heal and forgive when you don't hate.. Am trying not.. It is really a sad and depressing poem

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Being a while.. Thanks.

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      feels don't lie.. Thanks for the vote..

      And for finding time to read. It means alot to me

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Pasted and slept.. Just woke up.. I was a huge relieve when I realize how much people cared.. Thanks.

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Deborah Brooks. That will be nice and kind of you

      My most pressing need right now, will be for

      God to give me wisdom and Direction..

      Thanks a lot. I appreciate

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      ChrisIndellicati 5 years ago from New York, NY

      Wow that was deep. We are all feeling like that from time to time. Life is full of obstacles that we must overcome. Great hub!

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Thanks man.. Life's tough.. And I thank God each breaking day.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Your pain is palpable in this piece--take care of yourself!

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Thanks AndreyHowitt, I will.. I will

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      You've have a few of us praying for you, my new friend.

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      And I sincerely appreciate your prayers.. They mean alot to me. Thanks once again. And thanks for your time....

      Though am alot better now.. But prayer is never too much..

      The good book say.. Pray without seasoning..

      Thanks once again.

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      Marcy Goodfleisch 5 years ago from Planet Earth

      Beautifully expressed - you really captured the internal anguish we can feel in so many of life's situations. Thanks for sharing - voted up and beautiful.

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      DeBorrah K Ogans 5 years ago

      Capedium, Deep! All of the above can be painful! You have expressed despair very well! There is no pain so deep that the Lord cannot in His time heal and restore! It is the perfect time to draw closer to Him! "The JOY of the LORD is your strength!" God Bless YOU!

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Amen.. I believe He has.. Thanks for caring you are God sent.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Often forgiveness can set you free. Don't hate those who hurt you, wish them well. It will hurt you LESS. All that comes our way is there for a reason, to let us grow, to make us better and stronger.

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Yes they are.. Thanks for the enocuragement

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Capedium, somehow I missed this, but better late than never.

      Just need to add to the mountain of voices and genuine support above, this is sad to the core, but what doesn't kill us will make us stronger, and my friend, you are strong.

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      It is never too late and of course, I appreciate your comment.

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      Capedium 4 years ago from Texas.

      I really appreciate your comments..

      I hope to publish the book as soon as I can..

      Honestly when I read your email, I decide to re-edit the book..

      You will most certainly be the among the first to find out when it is ready

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