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Poem.It’s You’re Fate

Updated on December 4, 2011

Those tiny


You believed

That you had

them all

Securely won


In your mind

There you are

coming back

for more

The lies

you told

As the



They now

seems to be


with you

A symbol

of your

New day

Being born

In Sin

Being shaped

in Iniquity


Into a new way

Facing your


You thought

you had

The battle won

Can’t run from


Life will always

Be the mark


by your


As it stalks

your every


Following you

with only

one thing

To prove

You have it

all to gain

None to lose

Can’t face

your fears

This life

is now

Can’t call

no truce

It’s not tomorrow

Stumbling in your


In this realm

There is no

make believe

What you give

Is exactly

What you will


Put your money

In the bank

With hope of


And added


Can one

put evil

Into life

Expecting huge


It’s appointed

Onto man

Once to die

After death

comes the



Face your life

The love of


Which the Bible


Is the “root” of all?


And the master

Of money

None other

Than the Devil.


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks and beautifully said . well the truth is how else is truth supposed to be known.

      Appreciate your truthful comments.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      We'd all have so much more if we had less greed and were happy with what is given us. The basics like health, happiness and love.

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      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Caroline . Yes the obsession takes over everything that's good, and center life around money. That is so sad.

      But I see a great day coming.

      thanks for all you heartfelt comments , keep writing !


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      I like the message of your poem Sky. People are too obsessed with money. It rules people too much. Great poem. :)

    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks "AE" "YOU ARE SURE CORRECT" If you see the real strategy behind what was going on . And you could not easily change it , while they were destroying their own people, and paying nothing in wages , the few who had were gobbling up everything.

      Now they have gotten so far, how do you pull them back. You can't.


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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I agree Sky. Greed has taken over the world. The fate of those who put money first is scary. A man's fate can be changed... Cheers

    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      They say the early bird catches those juicy worms , and I guess you wanted to share the only worm you caught!.

      That's a riddle and a cliche in one . Thanks for the read and as always your attention to detail in commenting.


      Guess on these when you were sleeping I was busy writing , am operating in spurts now.

      When anything changes with me the world would know .

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      Sky there was no easy way to say it// it's our fate... I believe this poem starts and stirs the primitive feelings we have inside because we do as we feel without thinking.. I like the wording and the message It's all our fate :)