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It’s Just A Dream That Comes When I Close My Eyes

Updated on December 29, 2011
Walking down the deserted street
Walking down the deserted street | Source

An Inspirational Poem About True Love

In my dream

I see her walking down the deserted grey street

No one but just her

She is covered in white linen

With the face of an angel

My vision is blurry and I cant see properly

I pull her close and kiss her
I pull her close and kiss her | Source

My world comes to stand still for a moment

As she turns around and her eyes kisses mine

Her sparkling brown eyes teasing my emotion

Then she reaches out for my hand

I pull her close to my body

I could feel her every heat beat beating like a drum

I could smell her perfume

Dancing sweet slow tango
Dancing sweet slow tango | Source

She becomes the queen of my heart

Just for a moment

On the deserted street we dance sweet slow tango

She brings out the man in me with her every kiss and touch

Her kiss opens the flood gates of my emotions

Sending me to ecstasy

Hand in hand we dance under the dim moonlight

She looks up to me and whispers my name so softly and gently

I pull her close and close my eyes

Dawn breaking
Dawn breaking | Source

But when I open my eyes

She’s gone

Then I realize it’s just a dream

That comes when I close my eyes

My dream only comes when I close my eyes
My dream only comes when I close my eyes | Source

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    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

      Beautiful thoughts and imagery.

      Thank you.

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Thank you Dim.

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      poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      Dreams are the screen our deepest wishes dance upon, the escape of what we suppress, the avenue of our greatest hopes. Thank you for such a beautiful poem.

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Poetvix. Those few lines are very poetic in nature. I bet you can write one out of it. I know you will..Thanks for dropping by and commenting.

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      Denise Handlon 5 years ago from North Carolina

      Beautiful poem. How many of us have had these images only to awaken in the sunlight...

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      Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

      Ian.. This is beautiful! "..her eyes kisses mine"..

      "She brings out the man in me with her every kiss and touch"...

      WOW! Powerful, and the imagery was great, I felt like I was there. I have had dreams like this, makes waking up feel like you are leaving a lover.. you crave for more. I am craving more of this poem! Great job!

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Mama,

      Thanks for dropping by and commenting. Theres more to come so hang in there...

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...great title Sir and certainly these perfect words put me in a dream of my own - and quite frankly I prefer not to wake up .......lake erie time ontario canada 5:34am

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      epigramman. Thanks for commenting. I hope you have a wonderful dream for that very special person in your life just as I do. I mean go back and finish your dream, HP can wait for a while. lolz. Its night over in the Pacific and I am ready to close my eyes to have my dream again tonight. Like I said it only comes when I close my eyes.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      beautiful pictures and great poem as well!

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      PDXKaraokeGuy. Thank you so much for the wonderful remarks. Happy New Year.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      you're welcome, my friend!

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      As she turns around and her eyes kisses mine..

      Am never gonna open my eyes...

      This feeling never has to die..

      It is love greatest books have talked about

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Capedium

      hahahah. Can I say "what a romantic comment". Appreciate all your words.

      Thanks so very much.

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      Capedium 5 years ago

      Thanks.. They were inspired by yours

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      You are welcome and I see you write so well. keep going.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      nice work, ian. enjoyable read.

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Thanks PDXKaraokeGuy...Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers. Ian

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      you're welcome!

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      Senoritaa 4 years ago

      Truly beautiful. Vivid with imagination.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Liked this a bunch! Well-done!

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      Ian D Hetri 4 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Thanks two beautiful ladies. Audry and Senoritaa..Glad you liked enjoyed it.

      Cheers

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