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It’s Beating (poem)

Updated on April 22, 2016

It’s beating

It’s beating


Occasion repeating

A gaze then a meeting

It’s beating

It’s beating


His mind is unseating

As she waits his greeting

A scent in the air

Entrances this pair

It’s beating

It’s beating


He feel his chance fleeting

A thought she’s repeating

He’s caught in her stare

As words meet the air

Then there in their eyes

They both realize

It’s beating

It’s beating


Soft thoughts now entreating

This shared wish completing

That all future’s fare

Be found in their stare

But could she surmise

This wish in his eyes

And as time had planned

So she took his hand

It’s beating

It’s beating

Music only


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      Devika Primić 5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Good poetry and yes beating and beating as he gets closer

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      Jools99 5 years ago from North-East UK

      Wonderful poem :o)

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 5 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      I am at awe with your poems, Mhatter. So lovely. It's beating inside me.

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      Kristi Sharp 5 years ago from Born in Missouri. Raised in Minnesota.

      Well spoken. Love the photo. I think this is what I felt like the first time I saw my husband....wash dishes. :)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Sublime and beautiful. Wonderful use of stanza as well.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Got me into the rhythm for sure.

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      Your cadence is perfect... your poem is like a dance. Very well done!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      I can feel the beat as I read, well written. Thank you. Jamie

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      Brillaint as always Mhatter and another gem to vote up and share

      Enjoy your day.


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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      And the beat goes on...

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      Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      "He's caught in her stare, As words meet the air"...sublimely poetic, Mhatter. I love it!

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Some wonderful lines in this poem and the image is brilliant. Voted up,


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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      Oh, this is a good one. I like the flow and feel of anticipation a lot.

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Up and awesome ! So easy to get caught up in the frenzy! Thank you!

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Lovely style of writing-hit lots of buttons and voted up :-)

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      ashleeosborn 5 years ago

      so great flow to your writing, and such a lovely poem. Two thumbs up from me.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Mh, the manner in which this is written, while reading, one's heart does start beating every faster, catching up with the words. Very lovely music and video.

      Vote up and up and sharing everywhere

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper