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It’s You (poem)

Updated on January 30, 2015

It’s you the music beating in my heart

For you the scent which carries me away

And when again the heaven greets my day

By you the wonder thrills my world does start


It’s you the reason running through my soul

For you the soothing which removes all doubt

And when a dream does hunger for control

By you I feel what Joy is all about


The dawn may find its meaning in the sun

While wishes turn to hope to make them true

Each passing breath a new one has begun

The breath of dawn the wish of loving you


It’s you which brings me purpose to maintain

By you forever always I’ll remain

Do Not watch video without someone to hug.


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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Great sonnet Martin, well done and thank you.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      The words dance on the paper when you turn

      your hand to write.

      Do your write these wonders or is some muse whispering words

      of love?

      Your talent for love's poetry is astonishing!


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      stephanieb27 4 years ago from United States

      Voted up and beautiful! :)

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      Beth37 4 years ago

      I hope you read this to her. Don't let it sit here on HPs.

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      Anil 4 years ago from Kerala

      Nice,beautiful.words are pebbles,and smooth.thanks for sharing.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Martin! I watched the video and felt their love..wonderful!

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      What a beautiful and romantic poem. I love the photo at the top - so expressive. Voted up and shared!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. So romantically wonderful. Passing this on.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      The true meaning of love, long may it wave...

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Thank you for this it was beautiful and wonderful !

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      So very lovely words to hear from someone . . . it's you! Very passionate.

      Lovely video. No one to hug around at the moment, but I will watch it anyway.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful poem, Martin. I don't have someone to hug at the moment, but I'm going to watch the video anyway!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Aww.Such a sweet sweet poem. It is really beautiful. The rhyming is amazing.It has a good flow, and the vocab usage is really good. The emotion is portrayed brilliantly. An excellent job! Keep it up!

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A lovely poem of love and so dearly expressed.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      So sweet and full of love! This has a wonderful flow and written from the heart. Loved it, MH! Thanks for sharing ..... :)

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      Dana Strang 4 years ago from Ohio

      Beautifully crafted. Wonderful emotions... "By you I feel what Joy is all about" - that line really hit me. That is love.

      Thank you for this.