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Jaw-Dropping Beauty (limerick)

Updated on February 23, 2013

My jaw really did hit the floor

When this beauty walked through the door

Mid stars by the scores

Mind this thought explores

Don’t stand by closed doors anymore


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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Yep, you never know when you'll get knocked in the head!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Brililant Martin!!


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      Debbie Pinkston 4 years ago from Pereira, Colombia and NW Arkansas

      Wondering how long she would stick around...

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Yep..she could hurt ya M...LOL..

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      ya, daydreaming or surely something wrong with you...i'm worried naughty hatter!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Oh, yeah and behind door number 3 .....

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow Martin.. lol she is a knockout.. like ruby said daydreaming? lol



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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Yep, it'll sure hit ya on the way out!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Daydreaming again? LOL

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      Susan Haze 4 years ago from Sunny Florida

      I hope it didn't knock you completely out.

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      Amy Becherer 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      We must all be careful what we wish for!

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      Beth37 4 years ago

      I think Mhatter would like very much to get into it.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Don't get into this too much. LOL

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Lol. Great one!

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      Have a black eye? - worth it?

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      Beth37 4 years ago

      I think she was looking for her clothes.

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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      Dreaming again I see. lol

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99...Walking through doors ??? better she walk through the walls ???

      loved your twist...