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Jesus Dying

Updated on August 26, 2012

See my Jesus

Draped across His throne

Bathed in a beautiful light

When all around darkness is owned.

His body is limp.

He is not breathing.

Bones are broken.

The blood is seeping.

He is covered with bruises.

Gaping wounds litter his entire body.

I put him here. I did not care

His precious love was my needed commodity.

Could he really love me?

Why did he die?

His death was to show our Father’s love for humanity.

Jesus died to break satan’s lies.

My sin is no longer. Your sin is no longer.

Praise God in three.

The blood of Jesus is stronger.

Brothers, from our sin we are made clean.


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      lcbenefield 5 years ago from Georgia

      Teaches, Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. I appreciate the votes. It is so amazing to me that so long ago, Jesus knew us and loved us but still chose to give his life for us.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Loved it! How beautiful a reminder of what it is all about. God's redemption plan set so many years ago transcends time and applies to our life today. What a story! Voted up and beautiful.

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      lcbenefield 5 years ago from Georgia

      tigerbaby, Thank you so much!

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      tigerbaby777 5 years ago from Nampa

      Beautiful! Voted up

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      lcbenefield 5 years ago from Georgia

      Platinum Owl, Thanks for reading and commenting. Keep searching for your answer. Ask God for wisdom. He will oblige. God bless you.

      MsDora, I appreciate your comment.

      Faith, What beauty that He is risen and no longer on the cross. Thanks for reading.

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      platinumOwl4 5 years ago

      I have often heard people say "Jesus died for me:" I wish someone sane person would explain how a person who allegedly died two-thousand years ago could have died for me. The logic is not there. suppose I went to the market and said at the check out counter, " my father who worked here twenty years ago paid for my purchase, do you think that would fly?

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      Dora Weithers 5 years ago from The Caribbean

      "Praise God in three." Amen. This is the entire gospel within your lines.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, we have been washed in the blood of Jesus! Praise Him. The victory is won. He is no longer on that cross, as He is risen! Awesome poem to glorify our King. Voted Way Up In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      lcbenefield 5 years ago from Georgia

      Molly, Thank you so much for such a sweet comment. I'm glad you liked it. God helps us make beautiful music with our lives.

      Whonu, Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you appreciated this. We are all called as God's children to proclaim His love.

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thank you for this strong statement about the love of God for His children and His Son Jesus.

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      Mary Strain 5 years ago from The Shire

      IC, this sounds as if it could be set to had a lyric quality. I liked it. :-)