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Journey With an Evening Cloud

Updated on March 5, 2012

It was my grandma's chariots that came alive,

The prince was taking his princess to his


The evening clouds taking the shape of my

Favorite childhood creatures of the fairy land.

Never looked at the clouds

this way ever,

The air host just served a good cup of coffee

My fellow passenger left me the window seat to look at the chariots

that was going eastward.

The soft mellow light of the setting sun

has made the cloud to look

fairly like a real fairy-land.


Time stopped a few moments


I was simply wandering on my Pegasus

to dip into the forgotten fairy-land.

...then an announcement from the cockpit

Made me wake up!

My journey with the evening clouds come

to an end.

061426H March 2012 Moira G. Gallaga©


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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      I love this hub on clouds, I found info about the online clouds, and ran with it 2 years back in terms of web development, so I can relate to this poem in every way thus my screen name, Nicely done. Voted Up!

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      Moira Garcia Gallaga 5 years ago from Lisbon, Portugal

      Phdast7! Thanks for the share and for your comments. I spent a lot of time in airplanes when I was still working and spent quite a bit of time staring out the window and at the clouds while deep in my thoughts. I thought of thos emoments when I came up with this poem.

      RebekahELLE, rebeccamealey thanks for your comments. I ran across the first pic on this hub while looking for pictures for my other hubs and I thought I need to write something using this picture. As I mentioned to Phdast7, I spent a lot of times on planes so inspiration was mor eor less easy to come by.

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Imaginative and fun to read. Great pics too!

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      rebekahELLE 5 years ago from Tampa Bay

      Love this! Beautiful imagery and imagination!

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      Theresa Ast 5 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      moira - this is wonderful and I love the imagery and the emotions and feelings you produce in the reader. I love the reference to Pegasus, so perfect. Definitely SHARING this poem. Oh! I almost forgot, great pictures!

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      Moira Garcia Gallaga 6 years ago from Lisbon, Portugal

      Thank you for your comments and compliments Fennelseed. Thrilled for sharing my poem with your readers. :)

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      Annie Fenn 6 years ago from Australia

      The very best way to pass time on a flight, imaginations running wild amongst the clouds - absolutely awesome, love this moria, this is the best, my votes to you and a share to my followers as well, if thats okay?