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Judgment Of Dread (limerick)

Updated on September 23, 2013

I felt bitter judgment of dread

The weight of cruel ax overhead

From heaven I’m cut

Through hells I must strut

‘cause I forgot what wife had said


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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      I am sure this is purely imagination on the man's point of view.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Forgetting such things will definitely banish you.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Now you're in trouble! Funny.

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      Marvin Parke 4 years ago from Jamaica

      There will never be a next time

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      So true.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Simply brilliant! loved the ominous image. :)

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      Blondey Hubpages 4 years ago

      Creative :)

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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Come on, man, you should know better! Haha

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago exaggeration there! lol

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Wonderful and voted up Martin.


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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Now don't go and lose your head over such! hehehe

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Great imagination.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Ah yes, the cardinal rule "Always Listen To My Wife!" Thank you. Jamie

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      There is always a price to pay...which is worth remembering lol :-)

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      What a menacing photo!

      You certainly won't forget, again!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Off with his head indeed. We men only do that once!

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      If you forgot what wifey said,

      Then you are off to the races.

      She will remind you from now on

      And on a daily basis.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      You should pay attention if you want to save your neck!

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      FlourishAnyway 4 years ago from USA

      Forgot to take out the trash?

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      yea.. know what you mean.!!!