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Left Alone

Updated on July 6, 2013

Crept into the night
A shadow of myself
Hiding... all alone
Afraid, in need of help.


A "once-so-innocent" girl
That's too good to be true
Changed...
Because of you.


Slowly, she walked out the dark
The lips shyly smiled
Oh, so young...
To be broken.


She can't even remember
Since when she gave up her dreams
Follow her heart
And chose you.


The sound of the heart breaking
Blinding the night
The "once-so-innocent" girl
Is now out of sight.


Silently, she crept into the night
To hide... she's left alone
Scared and bleeding
To face again her own.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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    • unknown spy profile image
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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi bravewarrior.. just turned 24 :) Written this poem a long time ago, im just 15 yrs old by then..when i first fell in love and eventually, got my heart badly broken.

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      How old are you, if I may ask, Unknown?

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Yeah, i always do that.. then I'll tell myself, stop crying, you'll move one..well, I guess not my time yet :))..and it's like when's that? 9 years ago?

      xoxo,M.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Spy! You are not alone... I have been there and felt what you feel.... Stared in the mirror at my own tears!

      Someday! Spy! Someday! you will move :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Oh, don't be. I know we'll make it. we'll move on.

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      Lovely Me 5 years ago

      It's so sad that it happens to me too. :( loving someone when you know you can't be together.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      wow..it really does happen. this is for real, i thought i'm the only one in this world!

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      Murphy 5 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      It is never nice to know, to see, one in the same boat as me...

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      maybe, that's what i'm thinking too. But I already gave him my whole heart, totally whole heart. And I don't have any to give now to someone else. I didn't get it back.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      You know what's the solution to that spy! Find some one who loves you?

      Trust me... that works

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Yeah..he knows.. and there's nothing more left to do Rah. Still waiting for my miracle! I don't know if I could love someone other than him..tried before, but I can't.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      god that is some time spy! Does he know that?

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      yeah..almost 9 years now..still keeps on loving him. oh my gosh.it's so long already! inlove at first sight..until now. :) hehe..

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      How long have you been seeing him spy! If you wish to tell?

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Rah!! :) Wazup? Well, i don't know..because everytime I see him, i fall all over again..over and over again.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      CriticalMessage, really it hurts so bad, so I really agree that this is the worst kind of pain someone will feel deep inside.

      Thank you for reading and Godbless!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      I sense a pain in you spy! I wonder you have moved over it or not! I hope you have! Its shear pain which gives birth to such poetry.. such excellence!

      Brilliant work!

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      Murphy 5 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      It is the worst kind of pain that you had so eloquently expressed here. One which I, and surely many, are able to relate to from our own personal experiences. I know this pain. Well written indeed.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Nika..same here..

      I'm really a chocoholic.hehehe

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      NikiiLeeReyes 5 years ago

      Yes yes, i had to read again;

      for as you know,

      I am addicted to chocolate.

      yummy!

      Voting up 1000x's !

      -nika :*

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      Guest 5 years ago

      Great write.. Very beautiful and sad.

    • unknown spy profile image
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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you sooo much JoseR17!! Very much appreciated!

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      JoseR17 5 years ago

      Your are very welcome! Just speaking out the truth :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      This is sooooAhhmazing! Wow!! Never heard such a very kind and very wonderful comment for my poem :) I must say, I am so flattered.

      Thank you so much!!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      wow! very deep description of my poem, and i must I agree!

      Thank you Nika!

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      JoseR17 5 years ago

      That was a sad but beautiful piece! Congrats! Very touching, and I must say I re-read it like 3 times because it was so wonderful!

      Good luck with all your future writings, best wishes always :)

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      NikiiLeeReyes 5 years ago

      Deep, Dark and Lovely.

      As good as chocolate :)

      -Nika

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow, thank you so much. You made me smile..as always. This is very much appreciated sir. You are so great!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      So beautiful my friend, like the writer. I loved that you conveyed so much in so few words. A sure sign of talent but then I already knew you had talent. Excellent!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Leigh Ann! Thank you so much!

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      leigh anns page 5 years ago from New Jersey

      Wow so moving, I can feel her pain. Beautiful writing!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Rosemay..thank you and thank you again for the message and the votes. Yes, time heals and the right one will come along..on a right time and right place.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thank you so much Sen! poems make a great way to express our feelings inside..Thanks for reading!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      @Vims003.. hurt hurts..you gave your heart only to be broken. it's sooo deceiving.

    • unknown spy profile image
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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Sid. Thanks so much for the message.. God bless!

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A very sad and emotional poem. Most women go through this... having both their innocence and their hearts stolen only to be left alone and heartbroken. But don't let this stop you from falling in love again.

      Time heals and someone special will come along

      Beautiful poem and I love the form.

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      Sushmita 5 years ago from Kolkata, India

      Very sweet and sad expression, I liked the form you chose. Makes the poem a really beautiful read. Specially the lines about going out in the dark, alone. Voted up beautiful.

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      Vimesh Ummer.U 5 years ago from india

      really awesome words...it deeply touched my heart....even though i never experienced it before.....both the warmth and pain of love are unknown to me...

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      Sid Kemp 5 years ago from Boca Raton, Florida (near Miami and Palm Beach)

      May the child in you never grow up. May the woman in you grow courage to love again, and mother the precious child within.

    • unknown spy profile image
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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks Dawn! God bless! :)

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      shimmering Dawn 5 years ago

      Gosh! this is heart wrenching! True love never passes you by! Hang on there.. Have a blessed day!

    • unknown spy profile image
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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Steve! Yes, fortunately, there's always a promise of a new day. Thanks for stopping by!

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      Steve Wright 5 years ago from Norwich, England

      This does sound like it came from deep within, and paints a sad picture. I hope today you are smiling though instead of being sad :) A great poem

    • unknown spy profile image
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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi.. How are you? Thanks again for stopping by! Really appreciated your message :) ^;^

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks Vellur for the nice message here!

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      Esther Earl 5 years ago

      Reality of relationship that we sometimes can't control and understand... The best thing to do is always be ready -prepare ourselves for the most unexpected things to happen. And sometimes don't fully trust our heart..

      Finally, share everything to God. Only Him can broaden our minds and lighten our life's load. Thanks for sharing. This is so wonderful and beautiful as always.

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Sadly touching and sorrow filled in every line. Very nicely expressed.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Rosaline! How are you now? hope everything's okay. Thanks for stopping by..

      Thanks by the way..love that too! :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      GypsyRose, thank you so much! Unfortunately, we made mistakes giving our hearts only to be broken. They are so fragile and they will have to be taken care of.. :) Thanks again for reading :)

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      Rosalinem 5 years ago from Nairobi, Kenya

      Hi Unknown this is very sentimental and very deep...... blinding the night, just awesome.Voted up, awesome, interesting and beautiful.I like your profile picture.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. It's always the worst feeling when you give you're heart to someone who doesn't deserve it. However it shouldn't stop anyone from loving again because the next person will be deserving. Powerfully emotional poem. Well done.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello Ma'am Lita.. Yes it is indeed..girls falling inlove for the first time..got their heart broken... very normal situation. but it takes a lot of courage to go out again in the dark after you are left alone with your heart broken to pieces.

      Thank you soo much!!!!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Did my heart beat a little faster? yes! so very thankful for the big WOW!

      Thank you so much!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much WRITER20! I really appreciate it!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Bravewarrior, i got it.it could be the one I'm thinking. Heard a lot from others too . hehehe!

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you for the comment KJ force.. When a person falls in love the first time, they think the world was on their hands. Then when they got their heart broken, they would think the world is over... :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi AZLAN..nice to see you back here again. We may have different sotires but we share the same pain.. Don't force yourself to forget her. Just take one step at a time, keep yourself busy with things around you. Then one day, you'll realized, you've moved on. The sun may set but the promise of a new day is coming.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi TOBUSINESS..How are you? yes, because at the process of going through the fire, we become who we are destined to become! Greta, thanks soo much!!!

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      Lita C. Malicdem 5 years ago from Philippines

      This is a very typical experience of all "innocent girls". Who among us women of today didn't pass this stage? Girl, that's normal if it was your own, but if it only reflects your writing talent, this is awesome job! Congratulations for pulling through, anyway!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      WOW! This literally gave me chills. So much emotion. Awesome job!

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Sad poem wrenching at my heart.

      Voted up and sadly beautiful.

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Unknown, it could be what you're thinking, or that many have a Napolean complex and try to make up for their size by acting like bigshots. Or just plain a---oles!

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Very poignant words..society has become so cruel and left so many to deal with so much. Innocence taken at an early age carries a pain throughtout life...thanks for sharing your thoughts..

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      azlan 5 years ago

      i loved her very much,when i realised,i was never loved,my heart broke heavily.i still do love her,too much to forget her,but,with gods wish n help,i wil.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Bravewarrior got it just right, so sad, I can almost touch the pain.

      Sometime we have to go through the fire before we can be reborn into the people we are destined to become, hopefully wiser and stronger for it.

      best regards

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hello bravewarrior! yes..i do believe too..it's so sad sometimes you have to be broken to be whole again..

      ps: whats with steer clear of short men? (i have something in mind...just like what they always say.. hehehe)

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      So sad! I believe all things can result in good, however. Your lost innocence will help the blossoming woman become wiser. Do try to reel some of your innocence back in, tho. You'll need it to help you see the good in everything - no matter what happens, there's always a good side. Whether it be lessons learned or to steer clear of short men (ha ha), good is just as present as bad! Even more so if you look for it!

      Beautiful poem. You truly have a way with words, Unknown!

      Voted up and beautiful!