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Just Another Day Without You:poem

Updated on October 25, 2012
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Anan is an online blogger and private consultant since 2009 in the areas of relationships and interfaith spirituality.


Another hour, the senseless routine.

Another selfish tear to fight back...

No moon or stars, just rain outside.

Praying to make it through the night.


Sweet memories of days already pass.

Dancing in the shadows of the Den,

to the music of a love that never was.

Remembering of a now and then.


Morning caught up with my ritual.

and the selfish sun came up still,

even without you here, he's punctual

letting me know, that you'll never come back


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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thanks Anjili,

      Blessings.

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      Anjili 4 years ago from planet earth, a humanoid

      Sounds nostalgic. Makes one feel like bringing him back to you. Well done. Voted up

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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thanks glmclendon;

      I am humbled by your comment. Blessings

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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thanks rahul034,

      I am so glad you enjoyed it!

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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thanks swb78!

      Blessings.

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      Anan Celeste 4 years ago from California

      Thank you time2rite;

      I am glad that it spoke to you in such a way. Blessings.

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      glmclendon 4 years ago

      Good writing. You hit a home run. You were strong. I like what you did.

      Stay Well

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      "to the music of a love that never was.

      Remembering of a now and then."

      Sublime words of pain Anan...

      Beautiful verse!

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      Scott Biddulph 4 years ago from Gainesville Georgia

      I loved the loneliness expressed in this poem. Voted up and awesome! WP

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      time2rite 4 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

      A very moving, haunting tribute to lost love, ananceleste. It resonates deep within my soul. Sad, but very beautiful at the same time.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      powerful poem anan,

      an sd remebrance of lost love. i like this kind of poem, sadly because I can relate. there is bright spot though you will meet somrone new. the lord will give you a renewal.and he will be a lucky man.

      Love

      Michael

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      kennynext 4 years ago from Everywhere

      the future is what you make it, and you are in control

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