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Just what i needed

Updated on May 31, 2011

 hat tip..

sweat drip

hand out

dance now

sweep me

dir-ty

shut door

bare floor

toe curl

head whirl

heat rush

mouth hush

lip bite

feels right

seems wrong

our song

lay back

skin smack

wall shove

not love

heart vex

just sex

feel it

that's it

breath stare

right there

don't stop

core pop

feels nice

go twice

slam door

still more

no end

chair bend

legs rise

so high

sweet throb

oh god

ripped dress

oh yes

pull hair

get there

so close

let go

sheet grip

juice drip

can't breathe

suck teeth

breathe out

name shout

pace set

need met

core shake

skin quake

calm down

breathe now

clothes on

get gone

eyes closed

sweet dose

games done

i won.

 

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    • Cagsil profile image

      Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

      Hey Pink, how was the one night stand? :P :) That was pretty cool. Never considered writing anything in this manner, yet your creativity definitely did right. Nicely done. :) :D

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      Rodney Fagan 5 years ago from Johannesberg South Africa, The Gold Mine City

      Great read, right tempo and cadence.

      Tweeted this.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      I AGREE with Cagsil on your style. feeling your feelings pouring out of your words of flowing rivers

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      ive been tweeted?! im so excited!!! lol. thanx cags, there was no one night stand though, lol.

    • tom hellert profile image

      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      PU,

      boom chicka chicka bom boom boom whah whah wwhhaaahhh

      *squeah squeak squeak squeak*moans screams shudders pants moans

      screams shouts polka music n dancing-yea

      Net one Pink...TH

    • the pink umbrella profile image
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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      tom- stop it with the polka music, your turning me on. lmao. get the bagpipes out, and im done. hahaha.

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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      pINK,

      mY NEIGHBOR ACTUALLY PLAYS THE PIPES... NO JOKE - i'LL SEE WHAT i CAN DO...

      th

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      NICE! 2 worded sentences can say so much. this was all it needed. Very naughty. straight to the point. leave em hanging girl, wanting more. you'll win everytime!

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      Two Poles 5 years ago from Morgantown, West Virginia

      The rhythm here is flawless

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks two poles muah!

    • tom hellert profile image

      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      Pink,

      I wrote a new hub-"White

      crocodile" tell me what ya think...

      TH

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