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Karmic Revenge

Updated on June 20, 2012
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Every now and then

vengeful thoughts may cross my mind,

allowing me to feel

a sweet release.


Lost in a dream

I see a way out

of a sea of torment,

no longer do I need

to remember.


As I wonder

of your soul,

I feel a freedom

you will never know.


Though I've been beaten

I lift my head high

always aware

that the merry goes around

over and over

the past repeats.


Looking over your shouldar

always a glance behind

to see what comes.


Forever to worry

of what I will do

or where I will be,

if I will take a stand

make a statement

do something in return,

worry and shame your constant companions.


In your world,

a broken clock sits in the corner

forgotten under a layer of dust

a calendar remains stuck on that date,

imprisoned as you wait and watch.


Years go by

but I know my turn will come.

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      Aisha Jilani 4 years ago from Lahore

      nicely written. voted up :)

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      nenytridiana 5 years ago from Probolinggo - Jawa Timur - Indonesia

      Yes. Our turn will come sooner or later. I agree! beautiful!

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      truthfornow 5 years ago from New Orleans, LA

      Just give it time and what goes around usually comes around raciniwa.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      yeah, i agree with you on that...nothing good will come out of revenge...great work...

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      truthfornow 5 years ago from New Orleans, LA

      Thanks Derdriu. I took that picture of artwork painted on the wall of a church building. I don't remember the exact message of the quote. I just liked the picture.

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      Derdriu 5 years ago

      TruthForNow, Wow! And the original art work is equally great. But the computer is a bit jittery today, and the print isn't clear. What is the message just above the mountains and to the right of the girl?

      Up + UABI.

      Respectfully, and with many thanks for sharing, Derdriu

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      truthfornow 5 years ago from New Orleans, LA

      @michiganman567 Thanks for the support.

      @always exploring Thanks, I try to capture what I feel in the moment.

      Appreciate your comments @teaches12345

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Oh how those forgotten memories surface and cause us to cringe! Great poetry and very well done.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I for sure wouldn't want to be the one who did you wrong. Emotions are raging..Loved the honesty...

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      michiganman567 5 years ago from Michigan

      Im not an expert on poetry, but you seem to do a very good job with it.

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      truthfornow 5 years ago from New Orleans, LA

      @rebeccamealey thanks for reading and the nice comment.

      @ytsenoh I didn't notice that part.

      @UnnamedHarald I would just write endless poetry about it!

      thanks so much @billybuc

      I really appreciate all the beautiful comments. It gives me encouragement for my writing.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      You really did do a very nice job with this....the pace was excellent.

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      David Hunt 5 years ago from Cedar Rapids, Iowa

      Nice! I wouldn't want to be the one who did you wrong-- it would never end :)

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      Cathy 5 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

      That was a very fast read. Like the sound of a heartbeat racing. Nice piece.

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      I just love this. It makes me smile as I remember some events in life. Very nice free verse poetry. Deep and beautiful.