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Keep your mind, when all seems lost.
Deep down in the mud and mire
Where only darkness does prevail
I fight to keep my senses
My Mind is The Holy Grail.
To lose it, spells disaster,
So I cling to mud and mire,
Not wanting to slip further,
No matter how I tire.
Hold on tight, girl. Don´t let go.
Demons come, but they will go.
The air feels poisonous
I can hardly breathe,
As slip a little further.
How can I leave?
Hold on tight, girl. Don´t let go.
Demons come, but they will go.
Mind over matter is a wondrous thing,
Focus, visualise sky again.
Don´t be beaten by mud and mire.
You will rise to live again.
Hold on tight , girl. Don´t let go.
Demons come but they will go.
I try to listen to myself.
The mud and mire can´t keep me.
I struggle to find footing
till somehow help will reach me.
Hold on tight, girl. Don´t let go.
demons come but they will go.
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Hi Genna East.,
Glad you liked it. Thank you for your continous support.
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Hello ytsenoh...... Pleased to meet you on hubpages.
Thank you for the lovely comment. I love your illistration of climbing a mountain.
Demons come but they will go." Absolutely, and I love your words of encouragement and wisdom. Don’t give up. :-)
Very nice, Dim. It's like climbing up the mountain and slipping back and then you step on another rock to start climbing yet again. Good piece.
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Dear Eiddwen,
Thank you for your encouragement..
I´ve left it a bit late to say have a great day, so hope you have a pleasant evening.
Take care.
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Thank you, Mhatter99,
Yes you´re right. No one has life easy ALL the time.
A wonderful song and pic to accompany beautifully. Voted up and here's wishing you a great day.
Eddy.
Thank you for this inspirational song. Life can get hard.
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Dear Colin,
I don´t like the sound of your life being anything like my poem.
How typically kind of you to still send me all those good wishes from yourself and the cats.
If you need to unload, please E. mail me any time.
You´ve been a wonderful hubfriend to me.
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Faith Reaper, Thank you so much for your continuous support and for sharing my work.
You are very kind.
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Thank you Angela,
You take care.
Very profound words during a dark time.
Voted up ++++ and sharing
God bless, Faith Reaper
Actually this title sounds like my life story right now , dear friend, so I was really quite moved by your poetic words and thoughts here and very inspired too by our friendship and your lofty status to me as a most esteemed colleague ...... sending my sincere warmest wishes to you from Colin and his cats on this sunday afternoon at lake erie time ontario canada 5:09pm where we seem to be on the doorstep of spring - let's hope
Wonderful, insightful work, Dim -- truly enjoyed this! Best/Sis
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Thank you Monis Mas.
Sometimes our troubles can make us feel we are losing out minds. I love your comment on this.
Take care.
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Hi Michael!!!!!
Glad you liked the poem and I appreciate your comment.
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Lakshmi Murukesh....Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an encouraging comment.
I am happy that you liked it.
In today's world it isn't easy to keep yourself sane. I know how awful it sounds, but it's true. Wonderful poem, encouraging to keep the faith, and keep going.
"Demons come but they will go." - today may be bad, but tomorrow sure will be better.
Dim this is great poem .. I like the content and the belief in faith of don't give up .. "hold on " great poem Dim. thanks for sharing.!
Michael
Bravo! Bravo! I am spellbound!
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