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Let Me Be, That Is All I'm Asking From You : A Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017
Are you really?
Are you really?


Where the eyes when we need to see?


Where the heart when we need to feel?


Where the ear when we need to hear?


Where our mind had stuck when we need it to be free?

Did you know?

What we see not always the truth


What we feel not always the right thing


What we heard not always the real sound


It could be only an echo or repetition of someone else's mind

I will not proud for the thing which is not mine to be proud of


I will not written those I never understand


If I heard a different tune in the symphony


Maybe somehow it just because it is not mean to be mine

Give up now


And let me be



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    sord87 6 years ago

    We are always beside Him,good or bad things happens ,it is all from God The Almighty.There is always a space to greet Him for now and future!Good poem ,serious meanings and yet so useful!

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    I love you Freya. I could hardly read this beautiful piece as I thought about your persecution for being a Muslim. I read your no comment piece. But I have to read everything you write.

    I'm sorry. I shouldn't be here first for this wonderful piece. (God bless sord87- his comment beat mine by 8 minutes!)

    Tears stream down my face because of the pain that has been thrown at you. People have wanted to hate you and they don't know you.

    People - and there are TOO MANY - are loving to hate.

    I try to be Christlike. Christ tells me to worship the true God.

    Any proclaimed Christian who spews words of hatred to someone they don't know if SATANIC not Christian. Any Muslim who murders is Satanic. Any Christian that murders is Satanic.

    Hatred is indeed, without any doubt, Satanic.

    You are God's child and some of these proclaiming to be Christians are SATANIC and EVIL. You are God's child. No-one takes that away from you EVER! You are God's child Freya!

    These people are doomed that curse you!

    There is no course for these people but to repent! They will see the error of their ways and they will make THIS right. They will have to make this right to God because Freya is God's child!

    God is with you Girl! You are God's child!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sord87, yes that is true. Thank you, my Brother in faith, for reading this.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, King Micky. Isn't it your bed time right now? What time is it there? 04.56 AM?

    Ah, so you read that one. If you can see that pieces divided in two half. When I wrote the first half, you can say I am not that angry. But then I read another comment I never read before and I got really angry. Some people really smart in pushing someone else button, and that is how the last half of that piece written. In sooooo angry thought! Hhhhh... It is not nice, I know, but sometimes, I need to let it out, and maybe if it is able to kick someone understanding to the proper place, it can be useful. I hope :(.

    Thank you, Micky. You always nice for me. I hope God with us all, and not only you and me, and our friends who care about Him. Even these people so harsh, I do understand it happened because they didn't understand or they never taught to be understand how to be tolerance and full of love to others who different with them. They think they are the best and that made the blind. Poor people. But even I pity them, it not able to stop me to being angry too. hhhh....

    Anyway, I believe you are too, God's beloving creation, since you know how to behave base on a Golden rule in this weird place called World.

    I salute you, King Micky. Thank you for your support and kindness to me. May God bless us all.

    By the way, I am too always love to read your works. :)

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    Sa`ge 6 years ago from Barefoot Island

    hello Freya;

    so sorry you have had to endure such a thing. I think we all well be in a short time be in your position. Mainly because if we practice the Golden Rule we must love everyone even our enemy and tell me how many can do that. I am still learning myself to follow that rule 100%.

    If I love i can not have a weapon to kill. Can I let someone kill me or my loved ones and still love then enough to die for the sack of peace and love.

    Do you see what I am saying here. can i let someone kill me that wants to kill me without trying to kill them also? I can not answer this! because I know I can kill someone at the drop of a pin! this I know, can I practice the Golden Rule 100%? Tell you what, I am hoping I can, in the mean time I will love everyone even when I get mad at them. I will work hard at practicing what I know is a Truth that will bring peace to the world! Aloha. love you Bless you Freya!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Oh, Sa'ge. I totally understand. Way of God will never easy. But unless we keep trying our best to make it happen. Golden Rule for everyone. I love you Sa'ge. You are so wise and full of love. Thank you for being my friend in this weird world. God bless you.

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    Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    Having a world of delightfuly ezquisitly different personalities comes with the fobidden fruit of negative equasions that cause us to have to subtract;)

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    Kathy little wolf 6 years ago

    aaahhhh my sista!! I'm sorry you have judged/misjudged for you faith...so many of us (myself included) are very touchy about 9/11...but I believe those people are terrorist...along way from being an American citizen that just wants to live life, practice their faith, raise a family and not be judged/misjudged by ignorance. I'm so sorry someone as sweet as you has suffered!! my deepest apologies if "I" was ever @ any time, was one of the idiots to hurt your feelings...

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Freya! I always love your pictures. I loved your cat picture. I love all your pictures, of you! But this! Could I carry your Koran for you? God bless you Freya!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Mentalist Acer:

    Only you who can came out with mathematical hypothesis for every aspect in life. Very unique. Thank you, Sir. ^_^

    Kathy Little Wolf :

    Ah, dear, the only thing you ever did to me is made me blown away by your works. Beautiful works came from such a sweet person, love it. You are indeed really sweet, dear. And yes, I do understand about that touchy feeling, but it is hard to bear sometimes. Thank you, dear. God bless you. :)

    Micky Dee:

    Ah, Micky, you make me blush again! Thank you, Sir. \^o^/

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    Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

    Hi, Freya, it seems that I have missed your other hub, but this poem was so sad, and we all love you, so it doesn't matter about anyone else! hugs nell

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Nell, you are so sweet! Ah, yes. You missed all scandal and controversy! but it has passed now.:) I survived, thanks for many great friends we have here.

    Thank you, dear.

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    carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Beautiful work, Freya!!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Carolina. \^o^/

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    Christopher Price 6 years ago from Vermont, USA

    Touching and very well said, Freya.

    I hope that in your homeland you aren't subjected to the pointless poison you have been subjected to by unkind cretins half a world away.

    We can all be thankful that extremists of every stripe are a very small minority.

    I am thankful you are here to express yourself so elegantly.

    CP

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    ahorseback 6 years ago

    Once again Freya , your heart speaks in your language, and when it does ,we understand . Stay well.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Christopher Price, I am so lucky I live in the country which Muslim is majority and everyone understand what tolerance between those who different with us mean. But I think many Muslim friends who's live in western world not as lucky as me. I hope they will able to face it and not destroy by it and turn into someone else different, because pain can bent people's path into wrong place.

    Thank you, my friend. :)

    Ahorseback: Nothing I want more than being understand by all. Thank you. :)

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    ralwus 6 years ago

    Peace to you Freya. You have real friends here. Charlie (((hugs)))

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Yes, Charlie, I always know you are my real friend. Hugs back for you, Mr. dangerous. LOL

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    Yo! Freya! Just checking you out! God bless my Dear.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I am fine, Sir. Like always. But I am under writer block attack :(. God bless you too, King Micky. Thank you for you kindness, Micky. :)

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    Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

    Absolutely beautiful. You have a gift

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Blaise. I'm glad you like it. :)

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