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Let Me in : A Poem

Updated on July 5, 2017


I’m drowning under the rain

Let me in, please let me in

My body sought in the water

My words become stutter


Take one step and I will follow

Just let me in, please let me in

My present start become hollow

Wanting the door open in sorrow


Where this heart will go?

Where my thought will borrow

The shoulder for me to lean and let go

All the misery for tomorrow


I’m drowning under the rain

I’m drowning under the rain


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  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Capedium. Really? Interesting. It is one of your hub?

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    Ov Overo 

    6 years ago from Oklahoma

    I love the TITLE of this poem, it reminded me of a poem I wrote some time ago.. Surprisingly, it was also titled let me in... Is a nice poem

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    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hmmm... That is worry I read in your words? Well, I guess competition will be good if it make me always have a place in your head. ^_^

    Sorry about before, yes I'm sleep at that time. But still, always thinking of you! :P

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    Mr. Story Teller 

    8 years ago from United stated

    This is a beautiful poem. And it seems from many comments that Mr. Story Teller has some competition.;) I guess you are not around, I have been trying to find you. Maybe asleep. If so sweet dreams Freya.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you. ^_^ I'm glad you like it.

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    Rizwan Amjed 

    8 years ago

    A good poet; who touches heart !!

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I'm coming, Micky! Hahaha. Thank you, Micky. ^_^

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    Micky Dee 

    8 years ago

    I'll let you in! Get in here! Thanks Freya!

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, my dear, friend. Your comment always mean a lot to me. Inshaallah, you will read more. Or I will push you to! LOL

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    pintails7886 

    8 years ago from Memphis TN

    Great poem again, your work is supurb. I look forward to reading your future work inshaa Allah.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Dear Dohn, thank you very much. ^_^ I really appreciate your comment and your nice present in my Hubs. The 'thanks' word surely belong to you. Thank you.

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    dohn121 

    8 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

    What a powerful and moving piece, Freya! I liked it a lot. I really liked your selection of pictures for this. Thanks again for sharing.

  • Freya Cesare profile imageAUTHOR

    Freya Cesare 

    8 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Shop. I'm really happy you like it. ^_^

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    sophs 

    8 years ago

    Brilliant poem and great use of words, Love it. Great work Freya :)

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