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Let Me Sleep, Let Me Just Dream Away - a Poem

Updated on July 7, 2017
If everything is nothing, and if nothing is the only thing  I can see around me, so what it's left for me to live for in this solemn life?
If everything is nothing, and if nothing is the only thing I can see around me, so what it's left for me to live for in this solemn life?

"Inspiring by every wounded Soldiers I know, I hope life will be gentle and kind to you. We are all a wounded Soldiers too, Soldiers of this chaotic life."


Where have you gone?

My lovely dream

The road to you had fade away

The signs are gone, I can’t find my way

Cloud covering

Like blanket hiding my confidence

Doubt hovering

Playing with my common sense

Inside

My beast starting to wake up

Outside

I keep bursting with tears

Where you were hiding?

My sweet emotion

My heart have no reason to laugh

my gut have no power to move forward

That knife made from ice

Which you stabbed inside my heart

Had freezing my brain

But not able to locked my pain

Releasing energy

To the source of my anger

Free doubt completely

Destroying the meaning of forever

My restrained desires

Out of flame before it has been flow

When it dims, I slowly losing

My adorable Muse of prosing

Please let me sleep

Let me dream away

Please keep my breath

I don’t want it anyway

Soon,

I’ll embrace the death

With every grace

A wounded Soldier allowed to have


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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Deborah Brooks, Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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    Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

    Just beautitul..love your inspiring words...so many times I wan ted to sleep my life away..I voted up abd beautiful....debbie

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    Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Primpo. Stories of them always captivated me with sadness. Our heroes which living far from happiness after all they had been sacrificed. really sad. Again, thank you :).

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    Primpo 5 years ago from Brooklyn, New York

    I'm crying. lovely poem, my heart aches for the soldiers men and woman who risk themselves. they are always in my prayers.. good to get your thoughts out ..

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Like I love your writing too, Mr. E, and your sweet comments. You are such a great friend for everyone. Thank you, Sir. ^^

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    epigramman 6 years ago

    ..well I love your writing my dear friend - you have such a noble, pure and poetic heart ..... and it always leaves me breathless!!!

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    And so do you, King Micky! ^^

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    Micky Dee 6 years ago

    You are so divinely beautiful.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    GusTheRedNeck: Ah, that is nice! I hope many still have great life there. Thank you, Gus. That is really kind of you to do that for them. ^^

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Mentalist Acer: I hope it will become reminder for all, we are own our freedom from them too, the heroes of our nation. Thank you, Sir.

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    Gustave Kilthau 6 years ago from USA

    Ohhh Freya - That is a wonderful poem. It paints a very true picture of what life can be like for the old soldier. That is why I felt "back home" with my buddies when I volunteered at the local veterans' hospital. It was really interesting to me how that went.

    Gus :-)))

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    Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

    A beautiful and healing prayer Freya.;)

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hello, Peggy. I'm glad you understand the message. Yes, they not supposed to experienced this over the greed of several people. Imagine how it is for them, almost lost everything, and in risk to lost themselves. So sad. Thank you, Peggy. ^^

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    Peggy Woods 6 years ago from Houston, Texas

    Oh...these are some dark thoughts. Wouldn't it be wonderful if there was no need for soldiers to ever risk life and limb in warfare. Nothing remains the same. Old adversaries become friends and the soldiers who have risked it all are caught in the middle. Thought provoking poem!