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Lake of Fear, Tears of Hate

Updated on August 12, 2017
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Drowning in a lake of fear


Pushing away the hand that’s near


Deep, filling your lungs up with air


Trying for another breath to clear



All that’s lost seems to find


Your life too late in time


Closer to the bottom you fall behind


Leaving those who care back in your mind



Swallow your fate


Deliver you from evil


Swallow your hate


Deliver you from evil



Pushing back again you fail


Looking through a flame from hell


You bought the life that was on sell


But now you wish you were someone else



You hunt for the life you left


The one you sold to a petty theft


The one who made you a complete mess


The one’s whose evil you saw the best



Father I pray


Deliver me from evil


Again I say


Deliver me from evil



The time has come


To see through the lies



Let the tears of hate


Poor from your eyes



Deliver you from evil


Deliver all of us from evil



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      Ryan Fuller 6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks so much for the feedback nell. i enjoy the support from other hubbers.

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      Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

      Hi, really thoughtful poem, I think we all feel like this sometimes, cheers nell

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      Ryan Fuller 6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks Alastar, always good to hear from you friend. Im sure there will be plenty more. so many songs and poetry are building up in my mind

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      Alastar Packer 6 years ago from North Carolina

      A deep poem Fullerman; it evokes many images and thoughts.

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      Ryan Fuller 6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks debra and bud. i truly enjoy the feedback. always nice

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      Bud Gallant 6 years ago from Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

      Very cool. I enjoyed the read.

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      Debra McVay 6 years ago from Troy, Alabama

      beautiful

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      Ryan Fuller 6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks for the feedack beberlee and romancer. Im glad you enjoyed it. i have plenty more of them to check. out.

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Nice... ;)

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      Beverly 6 years ago from Philadelphia

      nice poem :)