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Lanterns Glare

Updated on September 1, 2013


I found you there ..on foggy night

with lantern's glare...

shining so bright

You found me where...I tried to hide

in covered grave,

where loves go to die

Stumbling over thorny paths ..

searching lightly through

weeds and wraths..

determined ever... to draw you near

filling you... with undulating fear

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Hp must be paying you overtime! lol So many good little stories for smiles! ^

      (Did you mean one instead of on?)

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Jackie ..!

      tomato ....tomat..'o..., in ....on ...one ... you tell me, what your mind is telling you ... and then we can both be confused.. LOL

      glad you like them ..!

      P.S. tell Hp .....I need a raise....

      someone has to keep Hubpages alive .. even if it is a lowly poet ..!

      Michael

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      on foggy night...maybe you did mean that...I know you are all perfection, so meant it in the nicest way as a friend.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie ..no offense taken .. it is unique to see how all hubbers interpret poetry or think they see.. what they read..!

      Hmmm..maybe I am losing my touch ?? LOL

      love ya Jackie .. keep those cool replys coming..!

      Michael

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Just reminded me of a comment someone made one time about breakfast morning. lol Thx for forgiving me!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Sorry... I am the one who should apologize my dearest flower.. I have berated myself already... for not noticing your avatar change.. those eyes are beautiful ... they could only belong to a woman from The Beautiful South..! very lovely..!

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Very interesting and creative, your mind of the poet. You will have to interpret this one for me... I will try... in a state of fog and confusion and being found by One of light but then causing fear? Up and more

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith ..thank you .. for the visit.. always look forward to your comments.. Well interpretation is in the readers mind .. so the end got ya..huh?

      Lets say that when searching for what you want and it is almost in your grasp you do.. kinda get scared to finally have found it.

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, I can see that now, excellent ... and oh so true!

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Thx, this is just temporary but my other full face just had a smirk. It doesn't when I open it at home, just at Hp! I changed it left, right...smirk, smirk and I hate a smirk. don't you? Now come on over and meet the new hug!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie .. I am sure ...even your smirk is beautiful .. have done it and she is awesome .. love her work ..! what took you so long ?

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      We are just doing one a week, so that is every two weeks each. It is a lot of work. I like having a theme too. Hope I fooled you for just a few seconds, lol.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I am sure you and Faith will do each one justice ( and you say I am about perfection) ..LOL Jackie .. don't you know that smirks keep people wondering what you are up to ?? Hey I love you both . very much .. and I would not be here now if not for the inspiration and love you two give out ! .. thank you !

      Michael

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Mysterious and beautifully crafted poem. Loved it - and the foregoing conversations about it, too.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Blossom.. yes them two (Jackie and Faith ) keep me inspired for sure.. thanks for the comments ..!

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