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Let Me Whisper in Your Ear

Updated on July 29, 2015

I have a secret

I know longer wish keeping

Nobody ever got the humor

Nor saw the beauty

‘cept me

Too cute

Too new wave

Too nude

Production nightmare

To create

To reveal

Naked bodies


In the woods

Maidens and masters

Tricks and tricksters

Mountain lioness

Directing a forest

Filled with love

Peace and


Majestic film



Not a pent - housed

Player to be found

If it came down right to it

Would I stay or run for higher ground?

Could I ask others to expose themselves

And not be willing to take off my crown?

I am such a silly girl.

I get silly thoughts in my head.

By definition,

I must keep…

Even if I need to sleep

For to let it go

Might be the wish

I have been waiting for

I have a secret

Lie down beside me

Let me whisper it in your ear

© 2015 ocfireflies


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      Shyron E Shenko 21 months ago from Texas

      Beautiful words, dear Kim

      When you whisper in the night

      When you were searching for the light

      You will find solace in you flight

      The respite will set things right

      When you the new star in the Heavens

      Shinning Bright ***



      Blessings and hugs my dear friend

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      ocfireflies 2 years ago from North Carolina


      Thank You so much!



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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Beautiful piece of write.VOTED UP!

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Phyllis, Faith and Jo,

      Thanks so much for your kind words. Trying to resume some sort of schedule as life has been turned so upside down. Feel so lucky to have such lovely ladies such as yourselves in my life.


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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Kim, I love the imagery, very intriguing and what a beautiful photo! It goes so well with the poem, like the Mona Lisa's smile, I just want to know her secret. Blessing always.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Darling Kim,

      I am so glad I popped over here this day, for I did somehow miss this mysterious one of yours which gives one much to ponder. I will reread it many times and think on it.

      Thinking of you and hoping your are enjoying a peaceful Sunday.

      Up ++++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing of course!

      Hugs and much love to you from southern USA always

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      PS: You are doing just fine, Kim. It takes time. She will always be with you. Blessings, peace and love.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Kim. This poem intrigues me. For some reason it makes me think of "A Midsummer Night's Dream". The lady in the photo looks like she belongs in the movie.

      I love your poem. Voted Up, B, I and H+

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      John and word,

      How did I get so lucky?

      How nice it is to sit down after a very, long day...

      And receive support and encouragement.

      Thank You,


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      Word 3 years ago from Chicago

      Loving it Kim, Filled with love, Peace and Acceptance... Superb!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Kim, we all understand I am sure. Take your time. Hugs.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Bill, John, Suzette, Kevin, GRL, Amada6868,

      Please forgive me for my late response, but know how very thankful I am for all of you. Please be patient with me as I make my way back to HP and catch up on all of your works.

      Peace and Love,


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      Amanda M 3 years ago from Unknown

      This gave me the chills!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Really nice. Enjoyed this.

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      What is a secret? The secret that I see is in the photo - she looks like she just slit her wrists. Lovely poem Kim and interesting too. I love mysteries. I voted up, shared and pinned it.


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      Suzette Walker 3 years ago from Taos, NM

      World of secrets, don't we love to have and to tell. I love this one!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      What a great poem Kim. I love the short quick lines especially this witty phrase "not a pent-housed player to be found." Voted up.

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Your poetry reads like a machine gun....burst after burst of power, with deadly aim at the target. Loved this one, Kim.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Thanks Audrey!

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Ah loved this Kim!


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