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Let it be a sweet torture – the poem

Updated on February 7, 2013
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Let it be a sweet torture

But then it’s better

Then to be nothing for ever

The crevices in precious hollow fear

That you always tell, I am a lie to consider.

Let it be a sweet torture

For a choice always better

A reason to be dead and near

Just an illusion may be for sweet dear

That you always tell, I am a trance to consider.

Let it be a sweet torture

As for a truth to be better

And a few joy to be buried rear

If only the arrow of faith could feel jeer

That you always tell, I am an ecstasy to consider.

Let it be a sweet torture

A few pieces of honesty rare

But sharp reality nobody is to care

Only some feathery touch of emotion sheer

That you always tell, I am a remote moon to consider.

Let it be a sweet torture

The reality strikes hard and far

No wishes left to play with fake cheer

I know my position so beyond heart and prayer

That you always tell, I am a flower dried to consider.

Let it be a sweet torture

I know well where there is desire

No wish of sepia frames without future

Request not to play with useless risky fervor

That you always tell, I am an aching foliage to consider.

Let it be a sweet torture

As I am a lie

An illusion

To consider,

A new name may be

As a memory to refer

Do not you think, always will be a choice better?

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    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you, James .....for your kind visit here. Your votes are much appreciated. Take care and be happy in your life.I went through your poem ' Oddly enough' ...its breathtakingly beautiful......Thank you. God bless

      Deergha

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Wow it flows smoothly with a special music.The refrain: Let it be a sweet torture makes it as an interval to take some breath for an other round or some air for an other dive.I voted up.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks for your kind visit, view here. You are always most welcome to to read more of my hubs. It will be my pleasure actually. Thanks again.

      God bless

      deergha

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      JayDeck 

      5 years ago from New Jersey

      "I am a lie to consider." I must say that this is really excellent work! I will be reading more soon. Thanks.

      -J

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Wowww.......My happiness knows no bound here. Thank you and you really are making me honored. Dear Emigramman.....Hope you have a good night sleep.....my endeavor is successful as you consider it to be your lullaby ....good night and God bless you always!

      And i do hope you have a nice tomorrow waiting for you with many smiles ahead.

      Deergha

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      epigramman 

      5 years ago

      ..it would be sweet torture 'not' to come here and say you, my dear, are a poet for the ages. Your words are sublime and pure, no doubt like the lady behind the pen - and off to bed I go now at lake erie time ontario canada 2:15am with your words as my poetic lullaby.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks @girishpuri for your precious visit here with comment. God bless you tooo

      deergha

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      Girish puri 

      5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      I am a lie,

      an illusion.....

      awesome deergha, God bless.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks Nell for your kind visit, view and votes here. God bless

      deergha

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      Nell Rose 

      5 years ago from England

      Lovely poem with so much meaning, and the photos were amazing too! voted up!

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks and have a good day ahead @ AudreyHowitt

      Thank you@SiberianWolf for your kind visit here. Have a good day ahead:-)

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      Eric T. Shortridge 

      5 years ago from MidWest

      the photos go beautifully with this... thanks for the ride :)

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      Audrey Howitt 

      5 years ago from California

      I love how you paired this verse with the pictures---they work so well together

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Uhhhh like ever again, I am so much happy to see you here dear Gypsy......thanks that you liked this hub. Your visit, view, votes and shares are very much appreciated indeed :-)

      God bless you always

      deergha

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This was incredible. Love the pics. Passing this on.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      You are always welcome here. Its my pleasure indeed to have your kind visit and comment here @ Mhatter.

      God bless

      Deergha

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this well illustrated reflection.

    • dghbrh profile imageAUTHOR

      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Faith.....many thanks for stopping by here and leaving your comment. Your votes and shares are also very much appreciated always. God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you @Theater girl for dropping by and comment here. Your visit is much appreciated.

      God bless

      deergha

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      Jennifer 

      5 years ago from New Jersey

      Haunting, I really like this and enjoyed reading it!

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      Faith Reaper 

      5 years ago from southern USA

      Superb poetry, really nice piece. Title draws one in for sure.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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