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Let the Flames begin (a love thing)

Updated on July 19, 2009

Unite, under the moon and stars, Spinning together for eternity. Balance the light and darkness in this world!"

These worn-out hands of mine have been raised endlessly up to the pearly heaven

Begging for a savior, seeking eternal redemption, now I know I’m not forsaken

The feeling is simply unexplainable when I open up my own soul

Your warmth draining the desolation, that made me kneel and fall

I’ve written a thousand dark verses about the excruciating pain

But none about the hot kiss we shared under the virgin rain

Can you live without your only heart beating?

Yes, when you’re in love even air you’ll be sharing

I savor the feeling of your touch playing notes on my black hair

The sight of your angelic face as you held my heart and gave it a repair

The unique breathtaking feeling of your presence all around me smothering me with love

As we bound eternally in front of God as you handed me the ring that fit like a glove

For once I silence this irrational brain of mine and listen to my heart

As we join souls, kissing, and promising never to leave or depart

The tenderness of your white skin and silky blond hair reflect pools of flawless emotions on mine

This is the reign of light, the era of love and hope. And I know everything is going to be fine.

Like a genuine turquoise marked, you stand out with the beauty of the character as well as your soul

Your presence and love has gotten me addicted while binding the numerous pieces of my heart to whole.

Let the flames begin

And let my world spin

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      Uriel 8 years ago from Lebanon

      AIDY, coming from you that makes me blush * you can start imagining my smile from ear to ear* LOL

      I so love your poetry as well and i even enjoy being heard as well as hearing others.

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      Am I dead, yet? 8 years ago

      Uriel, the poet in you speaks so loudly! I hear you! Great one, Uriel.

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      Uriel 8 years ago from Lebanon

      oceansnsunsets it is a pleasure thank you for dropping by :D i hope you enjoy your stay on hubpages and keep publishing your hubs as well.. :D

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      Paula 8 years ago from The Midwest, USA

      So so nice, Uriel, I loved it :)

      Thank you for sharing. You have a real talent.

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      Uriel 8 years ago from Lebanon

      Ralwus, You always make me laugh my fellow friend. Yeh love is a little addicting LOL...i am still feeling stunned LOL...Like i have lived my life on Marijuana. LOL

      Brenda Scully, thank you for stopping by over again. You are very sweet with your comments. Thank you guys for your support you are really doing me a HUGE favor :D Regards to all of you :D

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      \Brenda Scully 8 years ago

      that word dear..... well what a lovely poem.....

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      ralwus 8 years ago

      Well this one is certainly upbeat and pleasing to mine heart as well. Ahhh love. Let the flames begin indeed. Don't spin too much though, it's dizzying dear. LOL

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      Uriel 8 years ago from Lebanon

      Thank YOU for being so supportive ... i simply love hub community :d

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 8 years ago

      Brilliant! xD ~ Deeply touching...beautifully expressed!

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      Uriel 8 years ago from Lebanon

      Jayb23 , i really appreciate you stopping by and commenting. I am glad that you liked this one. thank you for your lovely words and having the time to read over my hub. :D

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      jayb23 8 years ago from India

      Beautifully written. Simply Amazing. I liked the way you have put your thoughts into words. keep it up