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Let the mistake be done by me

Updated on September 7, 2014

I do know it,

very well,

that your love,

is extremely pure,

and myself,

the enchanted one,

but the circumstances,

in which, we are,

too closed to each other,

please, let........,

the mistake be done,

at this moment,

and let me be loved by you.

I can't express,

your deep blue eyes,

capable to faint me,

the weather appears,

that it is also fully drunk,

which makes my mind,

unable to work.

When the eyesight of ours,

meets with each other,

it seems that,

the huge storms,

roaring loudly,

in the universe,

struck with an,

ear-bursting thunder.

The atmosphere,

around us, even the nature,

fearing from us,

the most pleasant air,

is also, unable to blow,

between us,

all of these are,

precautionary saying,

don't be close,

too much to each other.

But when we are,

so senseless,

our bodies are,

out of control,

thousands of tsunamis,

raising in the height,

fiercely pumping,

our hearts, then tell me,

How can we keep,

control on ourselves.

I suggest you my love,

don't mention all these,

let it all be happened as,

these tends to be happened.

Let yourself,

be merged into mine,

and let me do,

a mistake at this time,

Love me, and

let you be loved by me.


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  • Beata Stasak profile image

    Beata Stasak 6 years ago from Western Australia

    Enchanting...powerful and imaginative:)..thank you..

  • Cresentmoon2007 profile image

    Cresentmoon2007 6 years ago from Caledonia, MI

    what a wonderful poem of love. I really like this one. VOted up!

  • AUPADHYAY profile image


    thanks a lot.

  • Ruchira profile image

    Ruchira 6 years ago from United States

    Beautiful poem...loved how you could capture each moment in it...voted up!