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Lets walk, walk, walk

Updated on August 22, 2015

Let’s walk, in the park

Nonstop, just walk

Daddy with daughter

Mother with son

sweating with fun

An old folk with a new one

An old stick with a bud

A passing shelter

Ladies’ continual prattle

Oldies’ polity

Label spirituality

Some first steps

Some last sigh

Park is a baby life

We have to walk

Till we die

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      Richa 2 years ago

      Thanks Dora for the continuous comments, your most welcome for this kind of support

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      Richa 2 years ago

      Thanks a lot dear

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      Richa 2 years ago

      My hearty thanks to you dear for liking my piece:)

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      Richa 2 years ago

      Thank you so much whonunuwho

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      Richa 2 years ago

      Thanks a lot dear for liking my idea:)

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      Richa 2 years ago

      Thanks a lot KrakyePoku, we are all walking n completing our journeys of life without stopping.

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      Ann Carr 2 years ago from SW England

      What a jaunty little ditty; love it!

      Walking is good for soul and the body. I find it invigorating.

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      Dora Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      Walk . . . nonstop. You got so much into that concept. Beautiful!

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      Larry Rankin 2 years ago from Oklahoma

      There's nothing I enjoy more than a nice walk. Great metaphor.

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      Ayesha El Shahali 2 years ago

      great job

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      Richard Francis Fleck 2 years ago from Denver, Colorado

      Great! I agree walking is one of the mainstays of life.

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      whonunuwho 2 years ago from United States

      Life is like a walk in the park. You have expressed this beautifully my friend. whonu

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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      A nice reminder to walk. Who would have thought to put it in a poem? Certainly a creative idea.

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      Krakye Omane Poku 2 years ago from Ghana

      beautifully done. i like it. the wording and metaphor

      life is indeed a walk in the park

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