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Life Is Good - a Free Write Prose Poem

Updated on May 23, 2019
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John is a freelance writer, ghostwriter, storyteller, and poet. He always tries to include a message or social commentary in his writing

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Something a Little Different

This poem is a little different from what I usually write. As most of my readers know my preferred form of poetry is rhyme, or at the very least free-verse that still has a basic rhythm.

I didn't have a theme in mind when I started writing this, so just decided to give an account of my day. Instead of the usual rhyme, it is just written in free-form prose poetry. I am not sure of the quality of the poem, but I enjoyed writing it, I hope it isn't too difficult to read. If nothing else it will give you an insight into a typical day in my life.

It is more in the style of a fellow writer here at HubPages, known as DreamOn. He always writes inspiring poems about his everyday life.

Life Is Good

An audiobook is read

in the background

as I recline on the bed, resting.

An afternoon nap of sorts,

eyes closed but awake.

A more comfortable bed

cannot possibly exist.

Cars drive by occasionally

but don't disturb me.

Our cat, Phoebe, kneads my chest

trying to make me softer -

or so I like to think.

I feel like a human pin cushion -

but loved.

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Phoebe and Me
Phoebe and Me
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I spend time in the garden today,

weeding and cutting down dead bushes.

The chain saw made the job easier.

Then I cooked a late lunch, early dinner -

beef rissoles, mashed potatoes, and gravy.

Brunch is between breakfast and lunch,

so what is between lunch and dinner?

Linner, lunner, dunch? - good question.

We only eat two meals a day now.

I am pleased we made that decision.

Then I checked emails and HubPages,

And surfed the Internet a bit

but I kept dozing at my desk -

not ideal.

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One of our hensA new Pekin henBrook the Chook (our original hen)
One of our hens
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A new Pekin hen
A new Pekin hen | Source
Brook the Chook (our original hen)
Brook the Chook (our original hen) | Source

It was 4.00pm so time to feed the cats,

put the hens to bed in their pen,

then make my wife a cup of tea

before lying down to rest, myself.

It felt great to lie down.

I weeded another garden yesterday,

it was badly overgrown.

Now I am feeling the after-effects -

aching legs, stiff back.

I need to push myself physically more often,

so the muscles and bones adapt.

An afternoon meal, then rest, is great.

There is no need to wake up -

to cook.

My office/study
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On waking, I felt refreshed and alert,

free to write, watch TV, or read.

There are few time-restraints here -

life moves slowly in the country.

Working from home allows me

to arrange my day as I like.

Now that I have rested it's cuppa time,

then I'll sit and watch some football,

as my wife knits or crochets,

while listening to her audiobook.

We need to appreciate each day,

even the little things that seem mundane.

Life is good - exciting, not so much -

but good!

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© 2019 John Hansen

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    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      7 weeks ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Pamela, I appreciate you reading this and for your generous comment. Have a great day.

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      Pamela Dapples 

      7 weeks ago from Just Arizona Now

      I enjoyed this. Totally comprehensive yet neatly wielded.

      I'm happy for you and your wife that you have such a peaceful and productive life.

    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      3 months ago from Queensland Australia

      PS, thank you for such a delightful comment and for sending those angels. I am so glad that you enjoyed this and could relate to the message. Sending some angels back at ya.

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      Patricia Scott 

      3 months ago from sunny Florida

      Absolutely loved this----the mundane as you term it can be simply wonderful----there can be so much pleasure found in tiny seemingly insignificant every day events. There is a calm that comes with the familiar that I think our souls need from time to time. It is totally relatable and was a lovely journey to take with you.Thank you for sharing. Angels are headed your way this afternoon ps

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      John Hansen 

      3 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hey Lawrence. Thank you, everyday tends to be different but fortunately most are of a relaxed nature.

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      Lawrence Hebb 

      3 months ago from Hamilton, New Zealand

      John

      This was an awesome peek into your day. All I can say is,"I wish mine was like that!"

      Oh well, maybe one day.

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      John Hansen 

      3 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hey Paula, I am glad you enjoyed this little glimpse into my day. I can rarely sit at my desk with being accompanied by one or more of my furry friends, though Phoebe probably most often. Thank you for the visit, you are welcome anytime.

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      Paula 

      3 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Jodah.......I chose so well this morning, by reading about your amazing day, step by step, thought by thought. It was easy and so calming to follow you through your lovely day of life in the country. I smiled from ear to ear at the photo of "Phoebe," boldly standing between you and your screen, as I stretched to see MY screen, past my "Bruiser," doing exactly what Phoebe does.. Well, they love us, Jodah and insist we pay attention!

      Dinner sounded yummy....sorry I missed it!......Cheers, Paula

    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hey Li-Jen. It is nice that you found this poem relaxing and that my poetry can be enjoyed anytime of the day. I just hope they don’t put you to sleep :)

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      Li-Jen Hew 

      4 months ago

      Haha, Jodah. Relaxing poem. I think your poems are enjoyable at any time of day. Thanks for sharing.

    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you Asad. I am so happy that you loved this.

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      Asad Dillz Khan 

      4 months ago from United Kingdom

      A great and lovely prose John! I Love it man!

    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you Mary, I admit it tends to be easier to find peace and rest in the country then in the middle of the city. Life is what you make of it though I guess. Thank you for reading.

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      Mary Norton 

      4 months ago from Ontario, Canada

      What a lovely life, the architecture of your day is what I like. The way of rest is what I seek. I have to find it in the midst of the city.

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      Eric Dierker 

      4 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I just love putting Mr. Hansen on follow. I love learning more about life than I knew yesterday. (do not tell anyone I forgot what I learned 12 hours ago!

    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Good to see you Brenda. I appreciate you reading about my day and leaving such a nice comment. Glad you enjoyed.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Mark, thank you for reading this poem and being able to appreciate my day. Cheers.

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      BRENDA ARLEDGE 

      4 months ago from Washington Court House

      I enjoyed reading your work today, John.

      It was great to get a glimpse of your day. I especially loved the first part with your kitty-cat.

      I also loved the last part with you spending time with your wife.

      Great read.

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      Mark Tulin 

      4 months ago from Santa Barbara, California

      So true, John. Finding pleasure in the mundane is truly living. And thank you for an enjoyable day in the life of John as the audiobook plays in the background. My kind of day.

    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      MsDora, thank you for sharing a day in my life. I am happy I portrayed it effectively. Blessings.

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      Dora Weithers 

      4 months ago from The Caribbean

      The short lines and the jolly rhythm add to the truth that life is good. So does the picture of that white hen. You sold the message effectively.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hello Genna, thank you so much for the encouragement. I may just do that.

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      Genna East 

      4 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Hi John...

      I think you should write in free-form prose more often -- I loved this!

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Sean my brother. Good to see you, and thank you for such a thoughtful and encouraging comment. Blessings.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Chitrangada, thank you for such a lovely comment. Oh, really, those words actually exist? I never even thought to check. Oh, yes I see “The Open Dictionary” describes “linner or dunce” as the meal between lunch and dinner, usually between 3 and 5 pm. Thanks for confirming that.

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      Ioannis Arvanitis 

      4 months ago from Greece, Almyros

      Life is good when you have friends like you, my dear John! Thank you for this "window"...

      Sunshine in your Soul!

      Sean

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      Chitrangada Sharan 

      4 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Nice and expressive poem, and so much relatable. Free verse or rhyme or narrative—you always compose interesting poems.

      After reading this, I got curious about the words, which you have used to describe the meal between the lunch and the dinner. Interestingly, I even found such word/ words on google search—Linner, Lunner and Lupper. I didn’t know earlier, but you are right.

      Thanks for sharing another wonderful poem.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Venkatachari, yes life is good. The two meals idea is a bit of an experiment so times can vary to suit. We still tend to have a small snack later at night most days just to break the long gap.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi DreamOn, thank you or reading this and your wonderful and positive comment. It is great to really appreciate the little things in life. That outlook makes every day enjoyable. Fortunately, with the cooler weather here now flies are few and far between. Have a great weekend.

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      Venkatachari M 

      4 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Yes, John. Life is Good living like this. I appreciate that idea of yours. Having two meals! I think you can have it at 4 pm or even at 5 pm if it permits you and your wife (instead of at 3 pm). Only a suggestion. Not to worry.

      But, for me, I am having it all the 3 times. My dinner time is 9 pm which I am unable to change. Breakfast is at 10 am lunch at 2-2:30 pm, and dinner after a long gap at 9 pm.

      I enjoyed the portrayal of your life doing that gardening work, taking those casual naps, or resting on the bed at morning time listening to the background audio voice, or the sounds of passing traffic, etc.

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      DREAM ON 

      4 months ago

      What a great day you showed us and how you enjoyed all the wonderful simple pleasures life offers and hopefully more people will realize that is where all the beauty in life lies. Thank you for the sweet compliment in your hub. Anytime you feel in the mood to share another day I will be patiently waiting and welcoming your wonderful words that roll along as easily as a ball I kicked across my freshly cut lawn. Out in the yard, today enjoying the breeze until a few black flies decided to aggravate me and I think one of the sons of a guns bit me. See I would take any day with no problems or headaches. Thank you for sharing and I hope this finds you in great health.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Haha, Flourish. I am not complaining.

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      FlourishAnyway 

      4 months ago from USA

      That sounds like a pretty good day. Lots of rest, a cat, some reading and Hubbing, more rest.

    • Jodah profile imageAUTHOR

      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      It sounds like you have very little worries, Demas, and all you need. Yes, we are indeed blessed.

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      Demas W Jasper 

      4 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      I would love to fit in chickens and ducks (we did once upon a time) but a neighbor gives us duck eggs, and the raccoons are more of a hazard for chickens and their eggs. The senior citizens center provides baked goods, meat, milk, veggies, and desserts, so even the garden we will have seems almost superfluous. The afternoon nap is a life extender, and a loving companion fills the bill. Aren't we blessed!

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Val, my buddy, and fellow poet. I appreciate such a kind comment. I am glad I was able to make you feel like you were experiencing my day for a few moments. Sharing the more mundane and personal moments of your life seems to bring one closer to their readers. That was hard for me at first, but now I am comfortable doing it.

      Thank you for reading.

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      Vladimir Karas 

      4 months ago from Canada

      John, my friend--- A guy of your depth could just sit on your porch for some hours, do nothing but share with us what's going through your mind and your heart -- and your life would already appear complete.

      This is the way I see the fullness of life, while everything else going outside of our personal space is merely a bonus to be appreciated. Those skies, chickens, smell of food you made, your cat...hey, wasn't I somewhere there, because you certainly made me wish I had been.

      Thank you for sharing those precious moments of life with us.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Manatita. I thought about afternoon tea, but that is a light meal, this is the main meal, so that just didn’t seem to fit. Thanks for reading and giving your observation on the style.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Yes, it is great not to have an 8 to 5 job anymore, Ruby. We don’t have hummingbirds here, at least I have never seen any. Yes, that would be a little annoying losing all the sugar water lol. Thank you for reading.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hello Rinita, always good to see you. Yes, My day is quite soothing, except for the aches and pains after bending and crouching for hours in the garden. The reason for the two meals is that I have been reading it is healthier to have your main meal earlier so you have more time to burn off the calories and that at night we are more sedate just sitting around relaxing before going to bed. We have been having breakfast around 10am and then “dinner” around 3pm. If we feel peckish later before bed we may have a very light snack.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi Shauna, thank you for reading. I am glad it flowed ok, I was a little worried about that. I appreciate you always taking the time to check out my writing.

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      manatita44 

      4 months ago from london

      It's poetry of sorts, told in a narrative, topical or observational style.

      I suppose you were talking of afternoon tea - the guy between lunch and dinner - but you covered it lower down. Nice one!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      4 months ago from Southern Illinois

      John, your day sounds a bit like mine, except I cleaned my humming bird's feeders today, when I started to hang one up the bottom fell out, loosing the sugar water, was I upset? GRR...Isn't it great to not have a 8-5 job?

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      Rinita Sen 

      4 months ago

      Your day sounds soothing to me, complete with books, gardening, writing, and of course football. But why only 2 meals a day? I don't mean to pry but it sounds unhealthy.

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      4 months ago from Central Florida

      John, I love this! It flows so nicely as we walk (or rest) with you through your day.

      You're so creative. I always look forward to your posts.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Dana, thank you for reading and sharing your experience. Yes, we need to always enjoy the moment, and embrace the little things.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Haha Eric, yes I wrote it for you. I have been picking cucumbers, tomatoes, parsley and garlic chives almost every day. Now the mulberry tree is covered in ripe fruit..that means purple stained hands and tongue. Good luck with the planting Saturday, and yes I hope each day is better than the last.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Linda, this day was orderly, that is not always the case. You are onto a winner with your recipes, so why change a successful formula? Thanks for the kind comment.

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      Dana Tate 

      4 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Sometimes it's good to just realize life is simply good just because. I have those days. It's usually in the morning when I had a good nights rest and, I'm drinking coffee. I seem to be at peace and just enjoy existing. Of course that is before I actually leave the house. Thanks' for reminding me to enjoy the moment.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      You are welcome Brother Elijah. I often think my life is too boring to write about, but then most lives aren’t full of what people share on social media. Most days tend to be uneventful for most of us. I look forward to your next contribution.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      If you could picture my day, then the poem succeeded, Liz. Thank you for reading and for your kind comment.

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      Linda Lum 

      4 months ago from Washington State, USA

      Oh John, your day is so orderly. I dare say that if I were to attempt the same type of writing my secret would be out--I'm a total chaotic mess or all-over-the-placeness.(I'll stick with my recipes.)

      This was a pleasure to read. Your are always finding new ways to write; you are an inspiration to the rest of us.

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      Eric Dierker 

      4 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      You wrote this just me me you dog. My gardening includes no chickens but a young man, we still call boy. Pulling beets today and clipping some basil. The boy is learning to till the soil. Ready to plant by Saturday.

      I don't worry about what tomorrow brings as long as it is better.

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      Elijah A Alexander Jr 

      4 months ago from Washington DC

      In my humble "judging" opinion I say very, very good, John. Now you have me thinking about doing it but I'll have to wait and see. My days are so un interesting it could be nothing but a bore to read so I'll have to find some biblical concept or something out of my past.

      Thanks brother John.

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      Liz Westwood 

      4 months ago from UK

      This is a well-written account of your day. So skilfully done that the reader can picture the scenes as they play out during your day. It's good to pause and appreciate life.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you, Lorna. Not all days are this peaceful but I make the most of the ones that are. I appreciate your comment.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      If you say those three words enough, Bill, you start to believe it :)

      My life is good though so I can't complain. Thanks for reading.

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      Lorna Lamon 

      4 months ago

      What a lovely way to express your day, I wish my day were as peaceful. Your poem made me smile.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hello, Pamela. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

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      Bill Holland 

      4 months ago from Olympia, WA

      A mentor of mine would always say those three words. They summed up his outlook on living...life is good! I'm not sure anything else needs to be included...it is an all-encompassing statement.

      You have a lovely life, my friend.

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      Pamela Oglesby 

      4 months ago from Sunny Florida

      This sounds like a lovely day. You were productive and rested. I enjoyed reading about your day.

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      John Hansen 

      4 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Thank you very much, Nell. Linner, yeah haha.

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      Nell Rose 

      4 months ago from England

      That was lovely! And what a great way to show your day. love the linner etc, lol!

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