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Life tracks ( a poem of Haiku)

Updated on December 30, 2015
Amazing life...
Amazing life...
You never really know what to expect...
You never really know what to expect...
What will tomorrow bring?
What will tomorrow bring?
Happiness or distress...
Happiness or distress...


The maze of our lives,

A concept quite amazing.

New trails we're blazing.


Guided by our faiths,

Each, their own chosen belief.

Other's wishes not phasing.


Predestined success,

Determination, suppressed...

Or that we're so blessed?


Complex or simple,

A product of a dimple...

Aptitude expressed?


Life is quite amazing,

So well worth our rephrasing...

The positive stressed!


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Just take it with a grain of salt...do our best!
Just take it with a grain of salt...do our best!

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      whonunuwho 20 months ago from United States

      Thank you much my friend. whonu

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      Deb Hirt 20 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very upbeat and inspirational.

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      whonunuwho 21 months ago from United States

      Thanks MsDora and many blessings on this cold mid-western day. whonu

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 21 months ago from The Caribbean

      Every verse has a message and I like the conclusion in your last verse. Thanks for sharing your gift.

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      Nell Rose 21 months ago from England

      Beautifully done! I am useless at Haiku's so totally love it when someone gets them right! lol!

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      Shauna L Bowling 21 months ago from Central Florida

      Excellent message and fun visuals, whonu. Does your frog have a name?

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      whonunuwho 21 months ago from United States

      My thanks to Eric, swalia, and Reynold Jay for your nice reviews. whonuu

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      whonunuwho 21 months ago from United States

      Thank you my friend. whonu

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      Reynold Jay 21 months ago from Saginaw, Michigan

      Beautiful and uplifting. Well done.

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      Shaloo Walia 21 months ago

      Beautiful poem with cute images!

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      Eric Dierker 21 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Wonderful timing for me. I needed a great poem and a marvelous frog this morning. Right and wrong are not always the only arbiter of good. My attitude is the cause of my reality. I like your reality.