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Lift The Unliftable

Updated on January 25, 2012
I feel I need

I feel so down
So undiscovered just covered by the sound
Of every other female I could’ve been with
The stage turned black as if these words were scripted

Yes the loner tag above my head shines
And gets brighter evertime these feelings unwind
My thoughts, ideas, and epiphanies have saved me
From all the darkness that conquers those around thee

Check the mic it was gone
People live people die
This is it I’m hit if it’s wrong
Take a brick toss it high
If not then why
Treat life with the right
Of ways to decide.

Unreasonable hearts have been torn apart in the process
Of what should of never happened when they lost it
Conclusions seem to create all of these illusions
I don’t make sense just a dude who wants solutions.

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    • poetvix profile image

      poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      You make a lot of sense. I really like your urban, gritty style with tons of feeling. It's real, powerful.