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Lightning: A Poem

Updated on February 13, 2014
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You struck my heart like a lightning bolt,

Dangerous and unexpected,

A flash of light to brighten my darkened sky,

But that kind of love only lasts for a moment,

For if hope is a feather,

It must fall eventually,

But you made the journey worth my time,

Lightning comes and goes in bursts of passionate storms,

I never knew that something so beautiful would leave me burned on the ground.


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      WillStarr 3 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Nicely done! Voted up.

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      WillStarr: Thanks for voting!

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      Abba Elijah aka elijagod 3 years ago from Nigeria

      beautifully written poem

      I love you style of writing. well done oh....

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      Erin Bower 3 years ago from Georgia

      abbaelijah: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wonderful poem as always Ebower. Voted up.

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      Aga 3 years ago

      Yes, who would expect that something beautiful can destroy you...

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      2 years ago

      Interesting poem; do you really think that true love is destructive?

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      Erin Bower 2 years ago from Georgia

      Monis Mas: Very true!

      f: I don't believe true love is destructive. I believe that heartbreak can be found in the pursuit of it.

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