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Limerick - Summer Meal

Updated on June 30, 2012
2008 | Source

This is my first limerick. After reading, many will probably say I still haven't written a limerick.

We gathered together to eat

In the summer’s oppressive heat

Hands washed and clean

But we couldn’t begin

Because of the smelly feet


1980 | Source


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      win-winresources 5 years ago from Colorado

      Hello Beyond-

      A few rogue and warped brain cells doing their dastardly deeds.

      Much like my haiku and tanka, I don't really know if its any good. But I keep trying.


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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      DW, I say you absolutely totally succeeded! LOL Haven't seen that coming =) I think, your ages of experience in Haiku paid it's toll =) If one possesses twist of mind it is hard to straighten it up LOL It's golden =)