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Little Street Pup – Haiku

Updated on August 16, 2012
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A three part Haiku dedicated to a street pup !


Zooming cars on road colourful

Bright summer sun sparkling in squeaky polish

Mud spilled dirtied the speed.

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Little pup on road playing

Can’t open eye for shinning angry sun

Car crashed the little fun.

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Mother dog cried in pain

Car zoomed on the little body red

Morning sky dirty with blood.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Faith for your kind visit here which is always very welcome:-)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, how very sad. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Senorita,

      Thanks for your visit and comment here. It feels great that you are touched by this work.

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      Senoritaa 4 years ago

      Touched!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks @ spy...you are always welcome:-)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Voted up. Very well written deergha!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks for your comment Gypsy...yes its tragic indeed:-)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Now that was tragic and sad. Poor pup.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you, Josh.....your comment here is much important as about Haiku you are the one behind all my effort...as your wonderful haiku is the first inspiration for this style of poetry. Though mine is just first steps of learning stage:-)

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      dghbrh,

      Very powerful haiku here, wow! The poor pup! :( Great job here!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you dear Michelle....yeah I like dogs very much (read hear PUPS) ....I lost none in kind of above mentioned accidents but then every dead body of little pup I cross on road feels like its mine. One of my fav got lost in more tragic conditions then that. Anyways this hub is dedicated to those pups who are not mine but mine:-)

      I feel sad for yours too:-(

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      Michelle Liew 5 years ago from Singapore

      Wow. This is powerful stuff, my dear. Graphic and heartfelt. I lost a dog once to a hit and run driver...the neck became completely disengaged. The guy did not stop at all. Thanks for speaking up for the little street pup! Sharing!