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Lo-giene: A Funny Poem About Oral Hygiene

Updated on September 27, 2012

Lo-giene


Your breath stinks

I think you may be fasting

Wait a second

What is the question you

Were asking?

A backdraft wind

Invades my olfactory

I turn my head slightly

Heat against my cheek

Radiates as you speak

A potent aroma

Chases fresh air

From your mouth

Please stop talking

PWIV

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      The original Eman 5 years ago from london

      This is a funny poem mate. I have too suffer the pain of having to speak to someone when their breath has really been bad. Funny stuff mate i like the sense of humor in this hub.

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      you so f..king crazy but this had me cracking up at all levels..:)

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      Innuentendre 5 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Thanks Eman! A potentially awkward moment to say the least Humor is the final frontier.. Drum roll please Frank! haha thanks guys!

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      Dee42 5 years ago from Beautiful Arkansas

      Never read a poem like this, and I really liked it! Very unique and awesome, I loved the part of Please stop talking. Ha. Voted up.

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      Innuentendre 5 years ago from Houston, Texas

      unique is good! Thanks for reading Dee42!

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Funny! It reminds me of a boy in my coaching class a few years back! We all were afraid of him... He had this condition... an unhealthy one.. his mouth smelled very bad...and that too each day,... a lot of fun was made about him!

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      lovedoctor926 5 years ago

      Great hub!

      Listerine to the rescue!! I think this condition you are referring to is called halitosis. There was this girl in my high-school who suffered from this condition. I remember that many of us had to hold our breath every time she was near. I wonder if she knew her mouth smelled very bad. Many people need to practice good personal hygiene. Brushing and flossing and rinsing with mouthwash especially in the morning is a great way to keep your mouth and breath smelling fresh. You should always brush your tongue with toothpaste too for that exta fresh scent. you just never know who you might run into. lol.

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      Innuentendre 5 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Hello rahul0324, it can be embarrasing to criticize people on such an intimate problem which I assume they should already be aware of.

      lol Thanks for the comment lovedoctor926..Informative and insightful.. A few minutes might change the day!

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      Larry Rankin 21 months ago from Oklahoma

      Very amusing.

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