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Lonely Cloud !

Updated on July 10, 2012
the lonely cloud !
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It rained and rained with all its might


eyes with tears slept not whole night


accompanied all griefs though by side


yet felt alone on that showering plight !




teemed out eyes, whole lot of springs


thoughts in mind than calmed all kinks


How lonely the humble cloud was, that night


throughout in pain he poured but quite !

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      Farhat 3 years ago from Delhi

      Thankyou Jodah!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Lovely poem, poor little cloud ;)

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      Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

      I loved your poem shara, what a great idea, the lonely cloud, I won't look at clouds the same way again, nell

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      Ian D Hetri 3 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Beautiful poem by a precious woman. I enjoyed how you knit the words perfectly together, drawing out the deeper emotions.

      You are a lovely sweet writer.

      Much Hub love

      Ian

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      skye2day 4 years ago from Rocky Mountains

      shara You really are a poet precious woman. Love it. This reminds me after a storm there is a rainbow. Joy does come in the morning.

      My Love, Skye

      keep em coming girl.

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      You are very welcome, dear . I appreciate your visit and comment. and i wud love to read the hub on the topic, for sure!

      thank you, and nice meeting you too!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Hey dear, so lovely....thanks for your kind fan mail...i tried to send one to you also but could not manage...lol

      nevertheless...checked you hubs and this poem is so nicely done.....all votes up and away. I also done one on tear drops.....you may go through if you get time.

      happy to know you.

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      Olde Cashmere, Thankyou for visiting and your very kind comments.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      This is an excellent and beautiful poem. Great writing shara63. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome :)

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      even your presence at comments counts..so, thankyou rust!

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      rust 5 years ago from East Texas Woods

      I'm a little bit slow t0 commit myself here but I do say I'm getting what you're wanting me to. Everytime you're wanting to

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      thanks DreamOn that you enjoyed it!

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Another fun poem.Thanx for sharing.

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      Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

      you are welcome Mhatter...and thankyou too, for you find it pleasing!

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this delightful poem