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Lost Myself in Dark Ocean

Updated on May 18, 2012

I have lost mine everything

Now I want to write something. . .

The things that never take place in my life

But I chase them till last night.

Suddenly I feel

I m not fit for them

That’s why they’d never be mine.

I lost my hopes and drowned

In the ocean of darkness!

Ohh! Gradually I lost everything

But hopes

Yess hopes are still there.

I m everything, but not discouraged

No, no. . I m a failure,

Good for nothing, Can’t hope anything,

A great loser, A lost ship

Directionless being.

May be I am for nothing!

No one is mine.

Hey wait

Who makes my life hell?

Let me remember yes

Let me think

Ohh! My lover or me

Yesss a few words

I am remembering

He left my hand in the mid sea;

I dn’t know how to swim

As I was over-confident,

So I did not keep safety gaurd for me.

He left me and move,

Because he was a good swimmer.

And till that time

I m wandering either and thither

With the direction of waves.

But I have to pay

I have to repent

because I trust a wrong man.

I have to wander !

I have to wander with no direction.


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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      I voted up. You did another great job,Anupma. So many need to read it.

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanx Alex

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      Alex Jose 5 years ago from Cleveland, Ohio

      Nice poem

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks. The main motive of the poem is not to discourage in any condition. Thanks for interpreting in right way.

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      services4all 5 years ago from U.S.

      Everyone is having some dreams,goals and thoughts but only some dreams becomes true, but we should not discourage ourself. We should always tries to achieve the goal or dreams and hopefully we will get that. This poem is nicely written and telling us not to loose hope. I think you have added all your feelings in it. I really appreciate it.

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      archana srivastav 5 years ago

      Heyy, life has another aspect as well and it is optimistic approach, so think positive and go ahead.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Sometimes it happens , we are too carefree or too confident without knowing that in middle of the sea we will be left and do the swimming alone..Lessons learnt...wil never swim in that dark ocean again , once is enough !

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      Thanks Kebennett1.This is only my feeling for poem, otherwise I m very optimistic.

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      Kebennett1 5 years ago from San Bernardino County, California

      I hope you aren't really feeling this way! Nice poetry.