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Love Hard

Updated on June 11, 2015

BitterSweet

Burning kiss

passions flame.

Take me wild

and untamed.

Rough me up,

love me down.

In your arms

I will drown.

Hurt me gently,

love me sweet.

Bodies boiling,

feel the heat.

Steal my breath,

smother me.

Cut me open

set me free.

Pressure building

deep inside.

Release it in

Erotic tides.

Abuse my body

with loving eyes.

Stab me softly

until passion dies.

Hold me tightly

in the end.

Until I'm ready

to die again.

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      4elements 5 years ago

      your welcome.

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      Johnnybgood 5 years ago

      I get a different feeling every times read it thanks I just need to

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      4elements 5 years ago

      Thank you Docmo, I enjoy writing feelings and emotions. I try to capture each one. I appreciate the comment, blessings

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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      oh wow. i like this fast, sensual rhythmic union that captures the intimacy of such so well. The lean simplicity of this poem is adorned with great visual imagery. Awesome. weirdly enough i am holidaying in Florida and keep discovering more and more hubbers who live here!

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      4elements 5 years ago

      Thank you crescent I appreciate the comment. Blessings

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      4elements 5 years ago

      Thank you writer 20, and johnbgood. I appreciate the comments

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great romantic poem. You wrote so well.

      Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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      Johnbgood 5 years ago

      This one was awesome Keep it up thank you

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      misc-disc 5 years ago from Greater Earth Area

      Impeccable rhythm; very good.